I love how you write Maggie!

Just adorable! Need more Maggie stories especially paired with Eliot.

Adorable!
lol
I enjoyed the piece.

This was completely adorable! I love Maggie, and I love how you showed her slow rise from adorable-civilian to non-adorable part of the con.

This story is adorable!

That was so sweet.

Good job. I really enjoyed the story. I love Parker. :)

This is perfect. I love Maggie's transformation from a pure and adorable civilian into... well, a con artist (of a sort). I love the story, the different situations surround in that word. And absolutely ADORED when she finally got to use it herself.

Good story, solid characterisation. I especially enjoyed the Parker/Maggie interaction.

Pacing was good and you thought of interesting scenarios for them to deal with each other.

Looking forward to read more.

Thanks for posting . I like Parker being captivated by Maggie. Maggie is a mother bperhaps that is what she is drawn to

I can't belive I am pnly reading this now. Specially loved the line "She's not adorable anymore"

*lol* I really love the way you wrote Parker XD (but the rest of them were in character too)

Absolutely loved it.

loved it! loved it! loved it!

I LOVED this story! I loved the way you tied it up and the six times were great! All the characters were in character and it was well written. Great job!