| Reviews for The Underworld |
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Guest chapter 1 . 6/1 That was really delightful. I could read Yoda taking children seriously and turning them in the right direction like a shepherd all day |
8Gilluin8 chapter 1 . 8/10/2019 Деточки - они такие деточки! :) Но храбрые, молодцы! |
Kondoru chapter 1 . 1/31/2019 Oh, it might seem very innnocent. But the Sith believe in Demons, dont they? A Temple kid with notions might be more than childish fears. |
Evelris chapter 1 . 11/10/2017 This is so great! I couldn't stop laughing! People were looking at me weirdly but it was just too funny! Those children are so cute... And I already said it but your master Yoda is the best of the best of the best! |
Dinogeek chapter 1 . 9/13/2017 "One with holos please." I just let out a very unbecoming squeal at work and I blame you. This was just 100% adorable, beginning to end. But Yoda maybe don't encourage kids to jump down abyss holes; I know it's funny, but it's not terribly safe. |
Deadly Whirlpool chapter 1 . 7/28/2017 Amazing story! And that part about defeating the demons- got to be fast, flipping over the demon's head and cutting him in half... Looks like he remembered the lesson while facing Maul. |
lunarock9 chapter 1 . 1/5/2017 this was amazing oh my gosh ahhhhhHHHHHHH I laughed out loud so many times it was hilarious and adorable and I loved it. Thank you for writing this gem! |
m.tarnina chapter 1 . 9/8/2016 To reiterate: master Yoda is the bestest teacher ever. |
Filigranka chapter 1 . 4/19/2016 Beautiful fic with great world-building! Yoda is, indeed, very wise master. And you nailed children's psyche perfectly! |
FieryQueenOfAllSharpObjects chapter 1 . 7/31/2015 Aww I loved that so much, especially the cute part about the torffli (that cracked me up). |
Brievel chapter 1 . 4/14/2015 A really cute, engaging story. :) |
kierakov chapter 1 . 4/11/2015 Wow, Yoda doesn't miss a thing. This is an awesome lighthearted adventure. I keep finding your stories, scrolling through other users favorites and I thought I read all of your published stories, but I keep finding more. These are amazing. :) |
Andrasta14 chapter 1 . 3/9/2014 Very cute story, loved it! 3 I can totally imagine Yoda handling the overactive imagination of a youngling just like that, not to mention the feat of getting children to eat their veggies without threats or force. lol And such a sober little Obi-wan keeping guard over the other younglings is just too adorable (and also love the way you insinuated his future study of the Ataru form and even the very moves that he'll later use to defeat Darth Maul). :D |
lizzpercush chapter 1 . 2/14/2014 You are very sneaky. Not only did you plant Obi Wan's dedication to ataru BUT you also described the very move Obi Wan used to kill Darth Maul. Ataru flip and slice in half. Obi Wan just learned how to slay a very real demon in his future. I love this so much more now that I caught that. |
Padawan Aneiki R'hyvar chapter 1 . 1/27/2014 hehehee :) Much love here! :) I love how you have Yoda handlin' the boys...so cute. :) |