I usually don't like this type of story, but this one is actually really good.

Beautiful story, but indeed, really sad. Nice choice of words to express the characters's feelings.

Damn I was sobbing during the entire thing...that was so beautiful!

That was grate I am crying like a baby

That was so good and so sad it made me cry

How dare you do this to me! I didn't think to wear waterproof mascara today!

Oh. My. Gods. Why? The feels! I had wanted to read a death scene, and I clicked on this one, and I nearly cried my heart out. It is amazingly well written. You need to publish this. Seriously.

Oh yeh this is sad to read. The thought of Jace falling to his knees and crying shatters my heart into a million pieces. But there love is eternal and even through death I see it will still go on.

Well, that was depressing. Damn, I am so fucking sad now. Great job though!

On the off chance that you're confused as to what plagiarism is, I'm going to give you a definition that is appropriate to what you've done here.

Plagiarism is when you take someone else's work and post it as though it were your own. You see, you don't credit - not in **any way** the section of Clare's book that you're using. It's a **copyrighted** book. It doesn't belong to you, and by not citing it, you're committing plagiarism.

Now, in addition to that, you're violating international copyright laws. As a user of this site, you agree not to use the site to engage in illegal activities (see item 4.F). So, should the admin choose, they can delete your entire account because of this story.

You're welcome to write stories based on the books, but if you don't actually write the prose, you **can't** legally include it in your posting. Your illegal actions make the site complicit, and the indemnity clause in the contract you electronically signed when you posted this content clearly states that if the site is fined, you will be held liable to pay that fine, as well as any fines imposed upon your own person.

Please REMOVE the COPYRIGHTED content.

Sad story

NOOO! Clary!...

Well everyone look on the bright side: JACE IS SINGLE! XD Jk.

this made me cry and it has everytime i read it i dont ever want them to end that way and i feel for jace at this moment

I loved it okay I cried.

Omg I cried so much. That was beautifully written