The story is good, but since it has the copied excerpts of the "Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone" book, it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

You should remove all of the direct dialogue from the book and make the story so that the characters react to the book without using direct dialogue from the book.

This is really good! I can't wait for the next update!

cool

The beginning is beautiful, and then you stop. I suppose it was when all fictions of this kind threatened by copyright. I wish there are other ways for you to continue the story. I only know one good story still going now. You remember "Under a watchful eye" ? When I found out new chapters I almost cry.

I hope you decide to update I like this story alot

Please UPDATE SOON!

can u please hurry up and write some more of this story i really want 2 know what is going 2 happen next

please update soooon!

please please update i really really like this

keep going, liking this story plot with blacks wife and kid joining the group, maybe he can go to sydney for school so not to deal with umbitch..:)

Love this chapter and story so far! hoping to read more later!

I find it funny that Kat is such a mother-figure to Harry so quickly... I like James Black 3, but Kat is just... intefering. I can see that she 'cares' about Harry but she hasn't known him his whole life! So please tone down that mother-figure thing because Harry couldn't possibly see her that way so quickly! Remember! he lived with the Dursley's! -.-

thanks...update soooooooooooon...

It's a great idea! Please update! Please

Please update soon! Interesting story btw