Luka was actually an angel who was sent to see the things going on and her wings turned black for disobeying and falling in love with a human sinful acts

Nice story. The proper (and most popular) interpretation is that she was really an angel who was framed for being a witch by a jealous nun (Miku is actually a nun. There are no priestesses in Christianity making it impossible). She told Gakupo that cutting off her hair would release him from the spell. In the end, she sprouted wings dyed black by pain, despair and hatred and flew away. It's nice to hear another interpretation, though.

Awesome, i love this song too... I could not understand very well the end of the music ... but I think it is something like what you wrote.

This is freaking awesome! I'm really impressed that this your first fanfic! :D

This is awesome!

GoodSummary of Witch. But why isn't Len in this story? Isn't he a narrator with Rin?

actually, in the video Luka did not sprout the wings of a crow, but Divine wings of an angel, for she was an angel...at least that's how I perceived it... moving on, this fanfic was a lovely read, and I can't wait for more!

Not bad but the story moved a bit too fast and was hard to understand.

This was really good ]

I really love this story :D well done for publishing your first fanfiction xD i haven't heard this song yet but i will check it up on youtube :) i don't usually read gakupoxluka but i have to admit that this was a nice one :) i don't really like miku that much either :l she is alright sometimes...

Good job on the fic though :D i will be looking forward for more stories from you :D