Wtheck! You are rhyming master! You captured their relationship perfectly! Give yourself a pat on the back this is amazing

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE FIRST CHAPTER-POEM!

I think "wave" is a pretty lame prompt, too, but you always could've done it from Winry/Ed's POV when Ed leaves Risembool at anytime, really.

ANYWAY.

The thing behind the role-reversal is interesting, I have to admit. I like how you used it here. And I like the way Ch. 2 ended. Lol.

:)

Nice . Keep writing~!

love all the chapters! :D

Aww! Cute! Still don't know what the word "bellicose" means...doesn't "ose" have something to do with sugar? Meh. That's what I get for reading the ingredients on cereal boxes. A limited vocabulary, but an unnecessary knowledge glyctose and other such nonsense.

Well, I have to say I kind of wished you had done this for the KH fandom. I sure would've reviewed. Well, can't really favorite as an Anon, can I? Anyways, good stuff, it's real original to kick the whole thing off with a poem. I write poetry like crap. So, I can really appreciate the good stuff.

You have just proved your abilities further! This second chapter is brilliant. The dialogue was fitting for the scenario (y'know, Ed being all spacey, and only responding to Edward rather than Full Metal), and the ending made me smile. :D And type an emoticon smiley face as well. Now, you...UPDATE!

Aww! The ending was sweet! I love this so far, keep up the good work!

Great stuff! The poem sounds like it took a long time and it was really thought out and deep. (I never would've thought of the phrase "critique well" to rhyme with "equals" and "medical leave" with "IV" :D I just love it!) And it was kind of like a narrative, which was also pretty unique, and the way you described the aftermath of their human transmutation was perfect and it still rhymed! I find it amazing when someone can write as well as you do and still keep it in a pattern. I see the second chapter, so I'm just going to click on that now...

We'll see how that goes, but loving this so far!