HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO GO FROM HAPPY JOLLY SMUT TO FUXKING DEATH WTF NO I WAHT WKSKDMFJ SKAOWD THOMABDOW

Thanks for making me cry in 809 words. I can feel this death, despite it being unreal, in my heart.

Oh my god, this was amazing! , I'm crying it was beautiful! Excellent job!

Omg this is so sad. Poor Tessa, Jem, and Will. But I liked the last few lines, even if it is a heartbreaking ending.

great, just great :)

I cant take Jem's death anymore! But so beautifully written!

'You won't leave me here forever. It's such a long time'
'No, of course not'

...and i cried

Why would you write this? Why would you break my heart like this? ;-;

I knew when I saw the description that I was going to cry, but I had to read this anyway.

and i am so glad I did...every word was full of emotion, meaning, and sorrow...every little line between Jem and Tessa, Jem's words to Will, the descriptive words you used to paint the picture of the three of them together, and Jem's dying...everything was perfect and beautiful, and so fun to read.

AMAZING.

There are a lot of "Jem dies" fics floating around, but this one has been the best. You've really captured the characters - who they are and they way the speak.

Truly heartwrenching!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is so sad good writing but incredibly sad

Am sincerly bawling. X{ Amazing job.

*crying, crying*

It's so beautiful! And it's so sad. I loved it so much!

As dark as this is, I can't help but love it. I do feel like Jem was a bit cheated though. Here he is, finally getting his chance at love, and then he dies. I can't help but hope a cure is found.

Please, quit making my heart sad. I'm still working on forgetting a certain J/B fic. Lol.

Oh wow. This was so sad! Very well written; I almost cried! The only thing that stopped the tears was the thought that I don't think Jem will die in Clockwork Princess. It's entirely too obvious :)

Anyway, I love it! Definitely a favorite!