nice

wish this is longer but i love your james sirius

Oh sequel please showing the 3 of them sorted in Gryffindor

A very well written story! The Rita Skeeter thing made me laugh out loud. :P

Please continue this story. It's sweet.

Aww. It was nice. I'm happy the Potters and Weasley didn't hold anything against Scorpious just because he's a Malfoy. A couple days ago said they forgot what Draco named his son and I was just like duH! It's Scorpious. )

"You're Dad's famous!" should be "Your dad's famous" - I know it's a bit nitpicky but it makes a huge difference.

"My dad told me it doesn't matter to him ether, but it dose* to me." *does

'Rose, who was already waring* her robs, looked out the window,' *wearing

There, now that I've made myself properly disliked I'd like to ad that your portrayal of the kids is really endearing - poor Scorp. I would hand you plot ideas spanning all of Scorpius' (and Albus') seven years of school - but I will need them for myself I'm afraid XP

Good luck with the story, I hope you eventually continue it :)

Awwww... Poor Scorpius. Very well written though!