Reviews for Sekai Saikyou no Esper
shiroi white-phoenix chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
Hmm... it would be fine if I posted some of my OCs, right? If, you still could accept some OCs :D I want to post two of mine, is it fine? Buuuuutttt! You'll need Aphrodi for this :D
Name: Shinri Aoi; Wakusei Shi
Age: 13 (both of them)
Gender: female (both of them)
Appearance:
-Aoi: her hair is same as Aphordi, but a bit longer, and her hair color is far more lighter than Aphrodi's; she has pale skin; pretty much petite body, but not that petite; most of all, golden eyes, and it's really golden.
-Shi: she had waist length light icy blue hair with the bangs almost covered her left eye; she had cold, sharp blue sapphire eyes; she also pale skin and thin body; she's a little bit taller than Aoi (Aoi is around 154-158)
Personality:
-Aoi is kind, sweet, had this huge patience like a mother would, and pure innocence. But she won't hesitate to protect the one that needs it even it would cost her life, especially her loved ones like her friends. Aoi rarely get angry because of her huge patience and understanding, but she would begged until on her knees for the risk of her dearest. If they get hurt or harm, she would blame herself of it.
-Shi is cold, harsh, and mostly hard like ice, her insults sometimes always get someone that hot-boiled immediately get burned on the spot. Her glare is mostly an icy glare, so she always make the other person froze on their spot when they meet her glare. Despite her hard ice personality, she actually a kind person. She never intend to hurt people feelings but sometimes they mistaken her purpose of speaking. Shi is know protective to the person she dearly treasured. She pretty much can't stand heat so she rarely got a warm bath and ofuro
Likes:
-Aoi likes music, soccer, dancing, cooking, and gardening. She also love peace
-Shi likes winter, soccer, wolves, and she wouldn't admit it, but she loves cats and music as well. She often sing when she's alone and when no one is around her (but Aoi already know that habit of hers)
Dislike:
-honestly, Aoi hates war and violence, most of all, she hates the thought of killing. And she pretty much dislike blood, and hate creepy things as skeletons and inner organs (no matter animals or humans)
-Shi hates jerks, weakling, bullying, skirts, girly things, and she hates it if there's someone compared her to the lowly creature (I guess you know what) she also hated being spoiled by anyone
Casual clothing:
-Aoi wear a light blue long shirt, adorned with a white sleeveless vest with baby blue lining and white buttons, also a long sky blue skirt that reached 2 inches below her knees and she wear a pair of white boots with ribbon ties that is also white, reached right below her knees
-Shi's favorite casual clothing is her white thin over shoulder shirt that the sleeves reaching her waists above dark blue turtle neck sleeveless sweater and matching dark blue jeans with night blue combat shoes. She had a ice chain decoration at hanging by her waist (just like Tsurugi's chain thing, but Shi's the ice-looking one, not chains)
Ability:
-Aoi had ability of light magic, which allowed her to create shields for protection, weapons for battle, and healing for recover
-Shi also had the magic thing like Aoi, but hers is ice, and she only able to make weapons and ice creatures from it (for example, the wolves creatures that made from ice)
Weapon:
-Aoi choose a raiper as her weapon, the said raiper is adorned with long white feathers at the inner end of the holder of it
-The long, thin, icy sword is Shi's choice of weapon with ice decorations on it
Crush:
-hmm... Aoi is innocent girl... but maybe Kidou Yuuto? OwO
-Shi is a tough nut to crack, but then Genda Koujirou (honestly, Gouenji Shuuya too) won't be so bad, right Shi? (Shi: Like hell it is!) and if it's not, Goushu Flare will do ;) (Shi: it's not!)
Other info:
Aoi story:
Aoi is the younger sister of Aphrodi (like I said, you'll need Aphrodi for this), but they had been long separated from each other and have a hard time to contact to each other. And since Aoi is return with her light magic abilities, despite of her usual smiling face all of the time, she also have hard time in her neighborhood, which is why Kudou took her when he found her wandering around with nowhere to go. Aoi didn't prefer to go the outside world due of the reactions she get when she back to her homeland, but when she meets Shi, it changes. Then she starts travel around with her in intent to protect the high possibilities of other innocent and untrained ESPERS and peoples from the other ESPERS who doing bad things. But one day, she got an invitation from Kudou for the tournament between the ESPERS. Sensing something, she went to it along with her only partner, Shi, and start meeting many people, including Kidou.
Shi story:
Shi is actually an abandoned child; when she's still a baby, her father took her from her mother and abandoned her in the middle of the cold winter at the mountain with no one's around. But then, a queen of a wolves pack, noticed the baby Shi, abandoned in the middle of the snow storm, decided to take the innocent baby with her and raised the poor living. The female wolf had hard time to get the baby still in their packs due of the disagree of the others wolves in the pack, but soon, after time to time they accepted the baby and she grows between them. But one day a hunter attacked her family pack and killed one of her brothers which make her losing her control and attacked the hunter with her ice magic power that lies inside her. Realizing what she just did, she ran from the pack, afraid of the ability of hurting them, and somehow she ended up in the town. Shi had a very hard time there, and due of one accident, she never trusted any human until she meets someone that makes her opened up her heart again, but their meeting is a brief before she wandered off again, only to find ended up in the Justice as a passenger, and ended up meeting Aoi and become friends with her. She also joined the Slayed along with Aoi, but not before accidentally meet again with the person who just reopened her closed heart.
Aaaaaannnnnd... that's it! Sorry if it's too long, but Shi had so many things to explain.
Shi: (rolled her eyes) at least that won't make me OOC but WHY THE HELL YOU INSERT PRINCESS AOI HERE?!
Oops! Almost forgot; 'Shi also sometimes nicknamed people with harsh nickname, but the most nicest nickname she gave is for Aoi which is 'Princess Aoi'. Why she called her that is somehow a mystery :D'
Shi: (grunted) yea, very funny. May I please leave? (with sarcasm)
Oh you're not!
Shi: (sigh) I knew it.
Anyway, I'm looking forward on your next chapter so...yea... kept going :D
Hibisha chapter 2 . 5/15/2012
leave some lines please...my head hurts... .
Hibisha chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Name: (Last,First) Carter Elena

Age: (13-16) 16

Gender: Female

Appearance: She's blonde and has blue eyes. her hair is wavy and usually left open.

Personality: She's always happy and bubbly. She very rich and super-stupid.

Likes: She likes pizza, likes the colour orange, and loves cheerleading and ballet

Dislikes: She hates being sweaty and hates the nickname canary.

Casual Clothing: She wears an Dark blue coloured T-shirt with a guitar on it and a sleeveless hot-pink jacket with the words "So Hot" on the back. She wears a ruffled mini-skirt underneath and wears a pair of pink clogs.

Ability (one only): Cheerleading

Weapon (one only): Sword.

Crush: (taken-Mark Kruger,Kazemaru Ichirouta,Gouenji Shuuya,Kino Aki,Fidio Aldena,Sakuma Jirou) Atsuya Fubuki

Other Info: Elena was born in U.S.A Malibu. She is an only child of a very rich business man an her mom died when she was 7. she loves atsuya who pretends he doesn't care about her.
xXRoyal Mai and Miki HimeXx chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
Mai;was so cool X3

Miki: if your still accepting Ocs here's ours

Name: (Last,First)Ushiromiya,Mycella and Mikoto

Age: (13-16) both 13 oh can we be the youngest

Gender: both females

Appearance:

Mycella: pale skin,deep red eyes (that sometimes glows) long black waist length hair(straight sometimes ties it up using a red ribbon with sakura flowers)has the Ushiromiya crest on her right arm

Mikoto: fair skin, emerald green eyes long wavy brown waist length hair has the Ushiromiya crest on her left arm

Personality:

Mycella: shy,quiet,kind,caring,artistic,musician,great litature writer,Intelligent,fast runner,and tries to protect her friends want's to tell the world "Freedom is not something you buy but by gaining it through sheer courage and determination"

Mikoto: loud,spunky,kind,caring, drama expert,gossip lover, Protects her friends but is over protective of Mycella (her younger twin)

Likes:Mycella: sweets (all kinds),sour stuff,cookies,animals,soccer,Cookies,music,art,COOKies,nature,peace,poems and COOKIES!

Mikoto: sweets,games, texting, sleeping and teasing others

Dislikes: Both: rude,jealous,annoying people,bullies, seeing each other cry or their friends cry,and HATES SORE LOSERS

Casual Clothing: Mycella: graphic-tee(white and grey),purple scarf,black jeans, and one elbow length finger-less glove (left hand and one wrist length finger-less glove (right hand) Mikoto: grey and black tank top black cardigan on top of tank top,dark blue skinny jeans and a black beret

Ability (one only): Mycella: has black pair of devil wings and when her wings come she has a black star underneath her right eye and in the middle of the star is the Kanji for sins (in white)

Mikoto: has a pair of pure white Angelic wings an when her wings come she has a white star in the star is the Kanji of Hope

Weapon (one only): Mycella: Death Scythe covered in chains (forbidden weapon)

Mikoto: Golden Arrows

Crush: (taken-Mark Kruger,Kazemaru Ichirouta,Gouenji Shuuya,Kino Aki,Fidio Aldena,Sakuma Jirou) Mycella: KIYAMA,HIROTO (He's mine :D)

Mikoto: Endou,Mamoru

Other Info: They were born with their destinies already decided that Mycella will be in the Resurrection side and Mikoto on the Other side. So the twins had to be separated Mikoto stayed with the Usiromiya family and Mycella went to the orphanage where she met Hiroto. Also she (mycella) is called Mai by her teammates and close friends call her Ai While Mikoto is called Miki Mycella also has a compass made by her father as a goodbye present that plays a light tune and has N and E as the sun while S and W for the moon. Also the twins don't hate each other but instead they fear of fighting each other

Flaws: Mycella gets sick easily and loses energy fast and Mikoto gets hot-headed easily

Mai: hope you like them

Mai and Miki: Ganatte ne Ja Ne! xD
soapscent chapter 2 . 12/19/2011
Sachiko: Woow...

Tanaka: -sniff- Sounds so cool!

Sachiko: Please hurry and update!
Princess Of Flames chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Name: (Last,First) Ullilo Angel

Age: (13-16) 14

Gender: Female

Appearance: She has knee length black hair and onyx eyes with fair skin

Personality: she is very kind and can't see tears in anyone's eyes. she is tomboy

Likes: she loves soccer, being with her friends, reading(she is sort of a book worm) using her powers to help others.

Dislikes:Anyone who underestimates a females true potential, gangsters, bullies, anyone who messes with her friends

Casual Clothing: She wears a white sleeveless shirt with blue jeans which reach just below her knees and wears white heels. She has blue and white butterfly shape clip on the left sife of her head

Ability (one only): She can control her aura (spiritual energy) after that incident in Tokyo she got white and baby pink coloured butterfly wings

Weapon (one only): She has a ring which she tosses in the air and it becomes a sapter

Crush: Gouenji Shuuya ( if he's taken then are u accepting crushes from IE GO then make Tsurgi)

Other Info: She is a martial artist and learns thinks really quickly. It didn't take her long to master her powers.

Angel: Hey I liked chapter 1 it was really interesting. please update soon. i hope u will accept my OC
lime green lily chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
COOL~ please update more! It's so cool! Hehe! I wonder when'll my OC appear. Oh yah! What's with the Rank?
60 Percent Dark Chocolate chapter 2 . 12/17/2011
Great chapter, I just forgot to add one thing to my oc...

the weapon, i forgot to describe the staff...

The staff is black, two meter high staff with gold ingravings written in japanese kanji: 希望 meaning hope.

Yeah... Anyway, the chapter was great. just wondering, do you write your stories on your phone?

~ROku-Zero
Soul-Knight1455 chapter 2 . 12/17/2011
Ooh, nice chapter! Hope I will appear in the next chapter...

Anyway, update soon!
ScarletSky27 chapter 2 . 12/17/2011
Kelly: Sugoi~! Hope you update soon!
baa-baa black witch chapter 2 . 12/17/2011
This story is way better than what I thought. It's really cool. Thanks for accepting my OC.
Kichimairi chapter 2 . 12/17/2011
Kumi: Nya~! I can't wait for the next chappie!

Ki: I hope it's where I come in...

Kumi: be quiet and maybe you will!

Ki: ...

Kumi: sound familiar?

Ki: Oh well, it's good so far, so update soon please.

Kumi: Update soon~ Nya~!
lou-haru chapter 2 . 12/17/2011
Cool chapter Aine-san! Hope you'll update soon!
Kichimairi chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Kumi: you guessed it!

Name: Reyami, Kumiko and Kichiro,also known as Kumi and Ki

Age: 14

Gender: Female and Male

Appearence: Kumi has waist length brown hair tied in a pomytail andKi has spikey brown hair. Both have teal eyes.

Personality: both are bold, agressive, fierce, adventerous, and face things straight on, but Kumi is a little shyer, a Ki is a bit overprotective.

Likes: anythimg sweet, each other, but have a slight sibling rivalry, ad fighting with each other.

Dislikes: People who are mental and mean, homework, and Ki hates when something happens to Kumi.

Casual Clothing: Kumi wears flare jeans, a black Death to Barbie t-shirt, blue hoodie and blue headphones/ipod, Ki wears red camouflauge pants, a red Nike t-shirt, red sweatshirt and blue headphones/ipod, and both wear a bracelet tha matches each others.

Ability: Kumi has control over water substances, and same with Ki but with fire.

Weapon: Kumi has dual katanas and Ki has twin pistols.

Crush: Fubuki Shirou

Other Info: could you please put Kumi on the Justice side and Ki on the Resurrection side? I wat them to not know that each other is alive~! Pwetty-Pwease? Oh yeah, and their flaw is tha they are both very paranoid.

Ki: looks like I am in now

Kumi: yup!
soapscent chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Name: Masuta, Sai

Nickname: Sai

Age: 13

Appearance: Small and short, pale skinned with red eyes

andwaist length white hair.

Personality: Quiet, mysterious, creepy smile. Rarely gets angry.

Likes: puppets, voodoo dolls, flowers.

Dislikes: Beaches, loud noises, and Gouenji Shuuya.

Casual Clothes: White and red miko(priestess) yukata, and large red bow on back of head. Traditional straw sandals.

Ability: Black magic,( cursing,summoning large puppetsor voodoo dolls to inflict damage.)

Weapon: puppet string thingies.

Crush: none

Other info: She can pass off as a villain, and seems very creepy to others.
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