love your story so far and i hope that it allows you to pick your pen up and continue along its way because i find my self intrigued as to were this is going.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU ARE FRICKIN KIDDING ME! Why does every frickin story i read have to be last updated 2 years ago?! :'(

so its been a while since you've updated this... but i really, really want you to update this. two chapters and i'm already waiting to read more. i realise you may have let this muse go, but if it ever decides to return PLEASE continue!

Great story. Is Harry an elemental? He certainly seems at home in the elements. Please update soon.

good story
hope to see more

Pity that you repeated yourself without giving inshigt to Dumbi's thoughts.
Interesting ,would like to read more.

Nicol

This is a really good story! I completey understand what you mean when you say you don't really know what to do. My advice to you would be to read a few other Fleur/Harry stories during the second task and go from there. I would also read a few Harry and Dumbledore confrontations, but in this situation, go for something dramatic, kind of slow, and threatening. You also have to think about what kind of reactions the characters might have and how closely you want to follow that. hope that helps! :)

This got pretty bizarre.

Why did Harry suddenly have a power-trip with the grindylow?

Then he randomly started hating Dumbledore? Nothing appears to be wrong with the city or to implicate Dumbledore in its condition.

You need to think your writing through. You have a wildly out-of-character moment for Harry and then it's like you accidentally deleted a couple of paragraphs detailing how Harry turned against Dumbledore.

I love this story!

I know this may sound stupid but what if Dumbledore became Harry's protege. He could certainly learn things from the kid. He can't be that stupid. Right?

Great story hope you update soon

Update or so help me god i will send an army of angry dementors after you.

Cool story. You will write continuation?

Interesting!

Hope you're planning on writing more.

Sure. Review. Why is harry not acting canon? How the hell does harry lose his faith that fast. Unrealistic. OOC Harry.

They allow it because they are all buddy-buddy with dumbledore, as stated in canon...