i liked this story but i think you should write a few more chapters where it gets into both there felling like some in logans POV and some in Kendals POV and they can talk about how they feel and Logan could tell him that he likes him as more than a frioend and could ask Kendall to chose betweet him and jo and that they cant do anything sexuall not even kiss if he still wanted jo...but make it happy Kogan lol...that would be awesome and i think people would love it...keep up the great work...thank you

Oh gosh, I can't believe I never read this before! It's really really awesome *_*

Logan's PoV was just perfect, the way he kinda comes around to accept that he likes Kendall more than just as a friend. And I love that he's getting overwhelmed by Kendall's increasing affection and it's just perfect how he's taking it all and comes up with excuses until the point that he can't help but admit to himself that he's falling in love. It's such a bittersweet and amazing describtion, I can't even say how much this gets to me, really...And the sex was amazing, too. You're really good in writing it without disregarding all the things they feel, the confusion about this whole mess and Logan's uncertainty about the outcome. I love it that he somehow can't stop to question Kendall's motives throughout the whole act. It's hot and needy and amazing for all the unresolved things that still remain, all these things they never talk about.

And I'm really glad that there wasn't penetration, just hand-jobs, it makes the whole thing so much more believable, because it's all new to them and they're uncertain how they feel. It's really really fucking beautiful.

The way Kendall says he loves Logan is beautiful in it's own way, because Logan is so damn hurt by it, but somehow not, the confusion is perfectly described. And I just love love love the meaning behind this "I love you", the truth behind it, but Kendall can't totally admit it, either. I don't know if you get what I wanna tell you, I'm so confused about my own words Just believe me if I say that it's absolutely flawless...

But the best part is the undetermined ending. It's fucking perfect! Because it shows that Logan already KNOWS that he's in too deep to pretend any longer that they're just friends, but Kendall is just not ready to face it. It's so damn perfect, I don't know what to say...it's kinda sad and hurtful in a way, but not really, because the possibility remains that Kendall will come around to face the truth. And Logan's desperate attempt to just accept that they aren't ready to be together yet makes me want to cry like a little girl...:D

This is a piece of art and I can't wait to add it as one of my favourites.

Thanks so much for sharing!

NUUOOOOOOOOOH

I love the angst here its so delicious

And th something like sex but its not sex oh wait its making out, right

My brain flew out of th window addfdsdf

And now idk whether or not you should continue this cuz this is sooo hot and i don't like being hung on or something but its entirely your choice and and adywggs

Anyway. I say anyway a lot but wait its only said twice in this review and idk i have a theory about Logan and Kendall AND WHY HAS JAMES OR CARLOS NOT CATCH ON

I MEAN

they are

Their best friends too

and they should hear it unless you made this a jarlos too but noooo this is a kogqn

A KOGSN

KOGAM

FUCKING SARAH AND HER SMARTASS FUCKING MOUTH FOR MAKING ME HAVE TYPOS ADHSGA

KO

GAN

KOGAN

Yesss sexy kogan ftw sdhwriw

I can never write smut even if I'm a little, scratch that, REALLY SEX CRAZED CUZ I'M A TEENAGE GIRL WHOSE LIFE GOT ROONED BY THESE MOTHERFUCKERS

I'm sobbing

whyyyy make such a story

all th angst in this world

actually i read angstier stories than this one ha ha ha ha and i literally cried and wanted to hug them adhygosbx

but then again I'm rambling cuz IWANNA HUG LOGAN AND KENDALL bu huhuhuhuuuur

Wait wair waitttf

If Kendall is straight but he loves Logan

HE MUST BE LOGAN-SEXUAL AHA I'M SO SMART LOL

there concludes that kendall is either confused, loves logan or is just a sex crazed animal and likes to prey on logan muaaaahaaahaaaaaaa

anyway. Okay. Maybe I'm done here reviewing

Maybe not

I say maybe a lot

And they just rhymed yiss i can be a poet now

but really th kogan goodness and badness and usgsywhd

anyway. i love th angst asgeywhd so good so so good

i sounded like I'm having sex wtflolmao

Okay I'm done

Maybe not

This is sexy and tender at the same time; just the way Kogan should be! Good job!

Maybe you can make a sequel?

Thank you for writing it!

I love it!

so sweet! and son amaizng!

you'e amazing!

I love the history!

more!

sequel pleasee!

I love it!

thanks a lot

xoxo

AHHH! You can't leave it there! :'( poor wittle Logie! You must do a follow up! Please? If not, I understand. This was ABSOLUTELY amazing 3 Loved it loved it. :) Thank you for writing it!

-801-chan