This looks really good!

I loved this story, it was interesting. I am excited for the sequels. :3

All the italics are giving me a migraine so bad that I had to stop reading for a while, and I don't really see a use for then?

Other than that I think it's a good set up so far, but Kurt seems a little ooc

THAT WAS OUTSTANDING. I LOVED ALL THE INFORMATION BEFORE EVERY CHAPTER. WONDERFUL STORY LINE THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT.

GETTING NOW ABOUT BLAINE MORE. STUPID FINN THINKING KURT WOULD EVEN CONSIDER BEING COLLARED BY ANYONE. EVEN BURT THOUGHT THAT TO. FANTASTIC CHAPTER.

WOW, KURT GOT TO GO ON A NICE RUN WITHOUT FEAR. BLAINE THOUGHT OF EVERYTHING. HE IS SMART. AMAZING CHAPTER.

BURT IS RELAXED WHEN BLAINE TAKES KURT OUT, BECAUSE HE WON'T LEAVE KURT'S SIDE. GREAT CHAPTER.

WHY IS BURT'S PACK SO INCOMPETENT BURT TRUSTED SANTANA AND RACHEL WITH KURT'S SAFETY AND HE WAS ALONE AGAIN. GOOD THING BLAINE IS ALWAYS ON THE LOOK OUT. GREAT CHAPTER,

OMG, THEY WENT TO SUE, MISTAKE. TOLD HER THAT KURT IS STAYING AT ANOTHER MISTAKE STUPID. THEY SHOULDN'T NOT HAVE TOLD SUE ANYTHING. EXCITING CHAPTER. I AM PISSED AT BURT FOR GIVING SUE TO MUCH INFORMATION.

BLAINE KNOWS HOW TO PROTECT HIS SOON TO BE MATE. FANTASTIC CHAPTER,

THAT WAS OUTSTANDING. THE WAY KURT'S FRIENDS CIRCLED AROUND HIM IN PROTECTION AGAINST KAROFSKY. THE WAY BLAINE CAN SENSE KURT. AND THE SEAR FIESTINESS OF KURT AND BLAINE. WHAT A CHALLENGE. SPECTACULAR CHAPTER.

POOR KURT, HE FEELS LIKE A BROOD MARE POOR THING . HE DOESN'T LIKE WHAT IS HAPPENING. GREAT CHAPTER.

WOW, I LOVE THIS STORY. I LOVE HOW KURT JUST STANDS UP FOR HIMSELF MAKING HIS STATEMENT. THAT HE IS NOT A PIECE OF MEAT TO PASS AROUND. GREAT CHAPTER.

ARRANGED MARRIAGES, AREN'T ALWAYS GOOD, BUT HOPEFULLY THIS ONE WILL BE PERFECT. GREAT CHAPTER.

WOW, THAT WAS AWESOME, FIGHTS, BIRTHS, DEATHS MEETS AND HEALING ALL IN ONE CHAPTER WOW. THIS IS A FANTASTIC START FOR THIS STORY. I'M HOOKED.