This was hot and sad at the same time D:

Oh, that's so mean! And like a little slut, I LOVED IT! DX

There needs to be another chapter other then that it was really good.

Wow, i wish this was a multi-chapter! It'd be cool to see how Daryl acts around the group while this thing with Shane is going on. It'd be awesome to see how Daryl reacts when everyone finds out too! Great job!

You should keep writing this it is so good! I loved it 3

I love Shane in the TV show. Til I ready this story! OMG! Shane was such a bastard in this story. Ugh! My heart goes out to Daryl. Poor abused little puppy! Good work on making me hate Shane though. Eshh...you got a knack for writing villains! Would love to read more of your heart-wrenching villain stories. It's gut wrenching, but I kinda like it.

Hi, I just found you story. I LOVED IT! The whole idea that Daryl was abused by his brother, wow. I think I just found a new kink! :) I would love to see more of these stories, either how Shane has taken control of Daryl (evil Shane, quiet, submissive Daryl just melts my butter!)or how Daryl was used by his brother. I was wondering if anyone eles might have heard what happend in the tent between the 2 brothers, like what their reactions would be like. Either way, i love the way you write Shane and Shane and Daryl..YUM! Please could we have some more? THANKS!

Poor Daryl even that I'll admit thise was hot. Besides who wants Lori when you got Daryl.

Ooh...poor Daryl,he was used and not even realized.

I really hated Shane, but I loved de fic :)

This is so twisted and so good! But poor Daryl! Thx for posting!