Name: Maladi Gereni

Title: Seer of Space

Age: 7 1/2 sweeps

Gender: Female

Blood Color: A green blood, whatever one hasn't been used if Jade(Kanaya's) has been.

Sign: an upside down triangle with a line through it

trollHandle: benefactoryMalady

Typing Style: types in a kind, comforting manner yet Quickly Becomes Serious.

Strife Specibi:Syringekind

Fetch Modus: Help Modus: You must help someone to retrieve an item. 'help points' add up.

Alchemize: Syringe of Life and Death, Lusus-hide jacket, and actuallu I can't think up anything. .-.

Planet:Derse, but as I said before canonically this character must be Prospit

Land of: Frogs and Crevices: Basically a world with sudden cliffs falling ito endless darkness. Lots of Frogs, too. They have learned to fly.

Consorts: Neon Cyan Bats c0,255,255

Associated Item: Brass

Exile: Abandoned Fellowshipeer?, Artistic Follower. Basicallysome prospitian who worked as a hidden servant to the prospit dreamers, keeping/making the rooms, all that. She?He/It also legitimately believed in the prospitian religion, was very dutiful, but suddenly cracked, realized that her/his/their existence was meaningless, and exiled herself/himself/them self.

Sprite: Alexiasprite (programmed with her lusus pre entry, a white-dove like lusus, then later the lusus-hide jacket.

Likes: Medicine/healing/all that, Flight, plants,

Hates: Blood. Blood, gore, dead bodies, all of it.

Appearance: Maladi is a soft eyed troll with chopped short hair that springs up wildly, tends to put flowers in it. She's thin and frail, not muscley like most trolls? and is sort of short.

Horns: They wrap around the underside of her ears and spiral at her cheekbone.

Personality and Traits: Basically, she is a really nice young troll who barely survived the past seven years of her life, almost didn't. She likes plants, and helping people and learning about medicine. She also lives to grow flowers. She tends to be shy unless the circumstance requires her to be serious.

Relations:Alexi!

Pairing Permission: Sure, needs to (eventually) have a strong, fighting-like moirail.

Other: that's it.

christ i am just

incredibly late to the party

i am the slowest reviewer, it is me.

and i don't even have an excise. i'm reallyyy sorry. vnv

but i absolutely love how you wrote kate, she's just how i described her! X3

who's this delightfulDahlia person though?

are they like UU/uu? or are they like an antagonist?

i really hope you update soon. i'll try to be a little more on time this time round. D

Hello! Uh...I like this story a lot, but there's one thing that I kind of wanted to bring up that kind of annoys me.

Roles and Aspects are only supposed to be one syllable, right?

Well...

Jester of Thought - Thought is fine, but Jester is two syllables.

Survivor of Knowledge - Um...Survivor is three, and Knowledge is two.

I hope I'm not being a bother, but maybe...could you talk to them about this? There's a title test with other one-syllable aspects and roles I can link them to if need be!

Um, if it's not too much trouble, could I maybe re-submit an edited version of my submission? Luna's changed since I submitted her, and looking at her older version kind of makes me cringe. D

Gasp! :o This. This, sir- This has all the majicks. All of them.

I love how you're able to use Mr. Hussie's writing style so naturally while still describing the characters and environment. This is an incredibly intriguing fanfiction you are taking on, and with such a large following after a single chapter, it's bound to be a success!

Please continue! c:

Name: Zenter Xenrit

Title: I'd love to get Knight of Doom but I'd be okay with Trickster, Hero, Heir, or Seer and Rage, Hope, Fear, Life, Void, or Luck.

Age: Um, the equivalent of 16 years. I think that's about 7 1/2 sweeps.

Gender: Male

Blood Color: Just a tint above Aradia. #910808

Sign: A Z on top of an X inside of a rectangle.

trollHandle: timidPariah(or Pessimist if you would rather)

Typing Style: all lower case eXcept X and Z

no punctuation

he will just start a new -meow- line

random meow or mew will occasionally appear between words

both in typing and in regular speach

Strife Specibi: Bladekind - Dual-weilded Khopesh .

Fetch Modus: Specify - You state, VERY specificlly what you want to do with the item to use it. Item only stays out for the durration of the task stated.

Alchemize: (you don't have to use any of these)

candy corn gushers can of tab nasty sugar rush

perfectly generic object paper hearts companion cube

hopbeast headset adorafluffy headset

boomerang broken glass sharp return

boots rusty nails tetanus asskicking

Planet: Derse

Land of?: Blood and Flame. The ground is marsh-like and soggy with many hues of blood. The only color not present is Zenter's color; the sky is his blood color. There are uncontrolled fires raging across the land. Every tree, bush, or weed is on fire. The grass is scorched.

Consorts: Small black cats with red eyes.

Associated Item: Hematite

Exile: Oymmyn Tawers formerly Observant Transporter of Derse(you can change if you want) She was responsible for transportation of people and various items before her exile. She incurred the queen’s wrath for a rather late transport and insubordination when confronted about it. OT is short tempered and grumpy, she has very little patience for teaching or explaining and hates interacting with others.

Sprite: Slashcatsprite - A rather wicked looking knife . and his lusus(who accidentally programed herself.)

Likes: Learning, swimming, music, his lusus, ancient culture.

Hates: Sea-dwellers, mindless arguing.

Appearance: .

Hair - Wild and curly, pretty long. It reaches just past his shoulders. Pitch black. Despite being wild his hair is rarely knotted or greasy, Batcat taught his better grooming than that.

Eyes - Slanted, cat like, bright yellow. Already his irises show his blood color. Grey flecks still present but will disappear as he matures.

Clothes - Long sleeved black shirt with his sign in his blood color on the front. Black sleeveless hoodie with holes in the hood for his horns. Usually wears the hood up. Light gray pants rolled up at the bottom and black shoes.

General - Short with a slim, flexible build. Has wiry muscle. Most of his teeth are small and sharp, top canines are long and stick out over his bottom lip. Has a long scar over his left eye to his left shoulder down to his right hip.

Horns: Long, thin horns that grow upwards with a slight curve backwards.

Personality and Traits: Dark and brooding over his past, Zenter carries many burdens and secrets. He fiercely despises sea-dwellers for their various immoral actions against him. Zenter is reluctant to speak, although when he does, he typically has something important to say. Despite his cold personality, he is not uncaring. Zenter remains steadfastly loyal to those he cares about and is always driven to protect them, even going as far as to hide his pain and emotions so as not worry them. He bottles up his anger, hiding it deep, so that he can react calmly to even the most aggravating of people. However at the end of his seemingly endless patience if even a tiny bit of annoyance escapes it sparks into an inferno of rage and violence.

Relations: Name-Batcat. A cat with bat wings on her front legs. Has hollow bones like a bird, a little bit bigger than an average house cat. A very sweet lusus, she enjoys grooming Zenter and teaching him useful skills like hunting, stalking, and climbing. Batcat may not be very big but she'll fight to the death to defend her kid. .

Pairing Permission: Sure. Preferably not any sort of redrom with a sea-dweller since he really dislikes them. Blackrom would be fine though.

Other: Zenter has psychic powers, when he first sees a trolls sign he can see the moment of their death.

Kate seems like a nice kid c:

Oh, do we have two exiles yelling at her? Or is her exile just really impatient/stubborn? o: Her brother seems alright too, though I don't understand why she seems to be so careful not to disturb him. Does he bully her or something? :T

delightfulDahlia seems kind of...weird, I guess? How long has s/he been talking to Kate? You said years, so I'm going to assume maybe since she was around the same age as the original Kids? And I'd be a bit weirded out if someone called me a 'Maid'. :U

Looking forward to the next chapter! c:

Okay so this is the second character i've submitted and i don't know if that's okay, but i'm just going to write this anyway and hope you accept it. I have two guys in mind, but i really wanted to do this one first.

Name: Soma Smith

Age: However old Kate is (like 14 or 15 i guess. I like my characters to be in the relative same age rage.)

Gender: Male

chumHandle: silentStrike (orriginally silentMuffin explanation later)

Typing Style: he tends to type without any captital letters what so ever and he also will also ch/op words in half that have anything to do with fighting or stife spectibi (spectibuses?)

Strife Spectibi: Martial Artis Kind (uses hands and feet to kick and punch things like a boss)

Fetch Modus: Where the F*** did you get that? (fetch modus compresses everything and can only be acceced by reaching behind your back. As a result he forgets about it alot)

Alchemize: 1. Pastry book single cup cake tin cupcake kit old easy bake oven compresed baking kid that comes in a little metal box. 2. fire blanket ninja costume wet suit flame resistant ninja costume that can go underwater and dry quickly. 3. grass straw one of those silly water things you see ninja usuing, because you've always wanted one of those

Planet: Idk it doesn't particually matter to me

Land of: Bamboo and Mazes

Consorts: panda bears

Associated item: thowing stars.

Exile: Telltale JEster. He was originally the jester for the black queen, but the black king got jealous of how much the qeen like d him. The king locked him away inside the castle and fefused to admit that he did anything to the jester . Everyone but the qeen understood what happened, though not many were willing to do much about it. THe jester was a bit of a flirt and kind of an ass when it came to making those jokes. PErsonally most of the king's men were able to see where the king was coming from. However someone didn't accont fo the fact that the jester was a skinny guy and escaped in the middle of the night by simply slipping though the bars. From then on he became the Tedious Jailbird and was hunted mercilessly untill he ended up back on earth in the middle of the ddesert.

Sprite: Master Sprite (prototyped his martial arts master accidnetally when the blind old man tried to fell it to see what it was)

Like: Baking and PArcour. His favortite movie is crouching tiger hidden dragon

Hates: reckless violence

Appearance: Well he always wears one of those sereo-typical black ninja outfits with the white socks and sandals. Master was a stickler for tradition. Thanks to lost of harsh training and a diet of mianly rice and fish he's extreamly fit, but still lean and not bulcky. He's got the body of a gymnsat thanks to lots and lots of parcour (free running only better) and running fron anry panda bears. His eys are bright blue and his hair is wavy and dark brown under neath his ninja hood thing. His face is about average attractive ness (a little bit on the boy band side), though he has an extreamly clear complextion.

Personality: He took a vow of silence whe he was eight, so as far as face to face interactions go, he usualy ends up having to write things on a piece of papter to communicate himself. He has a love of baking (especially chocolate-red velvet ((like marble cake, but chocoalte instead of vanilla and red velvet instead of chocolate)) cup cakes with white chocolate icing and a single red chetty on th top), but this is purely top seceret and only makes thing for people who are very close to hime and whom he knows won't make fun of him. side from that he loves doing martial arts stuff, though will never ever ever never ever never use his skills for evil. He wore on his deda master's body. Soma tends to be a bit dopey sometimes, but always tries is best to be extreamly polite. Unfortunately he also tends to be a bit excitable and t o drift off inot a world of fancy when he's by himself. He also has some problems when it comes to technology, adnd only has a peser chum to keep in contact with his older sister. However he ended up meeting a whole bunch of other people through serendipitous cricumstances. Soma is extreamly loyal and has always secretly wanted to be the hero and also has a bit of a soft spot for a damsel in distress. ( i tried to make him sort of like a ninja human version of the wandering vagabond who likes baking)

RElation: He has a great relationship with his older sister. They lived in California where Soma decided that he anted to become a ninja after watching karate Kid. Sis encouraged this, as she did all of his other explots (baking). She trained with him on his own until he was eight where he then left their sunny Monteray home and walked all the way to China(sailed accross the bearing straigh) and was taken in by Master. By the time he got there he was nine. THe vow of silence thing was kind of involuntay but once he spent so much time on his own he just got used to not speaking.

Pairings: DO IT (I would like to have input on the pairing though if you could send me a message over fanfic. whenever the sory progresses that far i would really apreciate it)

Oteher: He is a firm believer in the magic of apology muffins (secretly deliciousl mini muffins that are given to the offended party in a little ble tin). THey always work.

I like your style of writing. :D Kate seems like a nice girl.

Just a speculation, but Kate wouldn't happen to be a Knight in her session, would she?

'KATE/ Embark on your quest

What are you, a knight? '

That line made me think it, but I would understand if I was overthinking things. XD

iC

I love your writing style! It makes me feel like I'm reading a legit fan adventure!

Just by the by, Xagres' quirk didn't come out right in the application I submitted. I'll try writing something random in it again for reference, if that ends up messed up to then just go with what you know if you choose to add him to the story xD

Rude. X:)

Name: Xagres Rodna

Title: Knight of Void

Age: 7 Sweeps

Gender: Male

Blood Color: A rusty green.

Sign: The Lacerta symbol is a vertical wavy line with two wavy horizontal lines going through it.

trollHandle: tristfulCamouflage

Typing Style: . X:\

(( Basically, don't use the spacebar unless you use a period and capitalize every word. Instead of 'and' use ''. Instead of two 'o's in a row, use '' which you can get by pressing NUM LOCK, then holding ALT and hitting '236' in that order. Let go of ALT and you should get the . Double L's get replaced by a capital X. S will always be capitalized, and if a word starts with S then double it!))

Strife Specibi: Yo-yoKind

Fetch Modus: Useless Trivia! Answer a question correctly and receive a surprise from your deck completely at random!

Alchemize:

1. Wooly Gloves HuskTop WoolyTop

2. WoolyTop Shitty Troll Manga Wooly Shit MagTop

3. Wooly Gloves Ghost Movie Ghouly Gloves

4. Ghouly Gloves HuskTop Gloves of the Interwebz (So now you can pull up holographic screens out of thin air with just a wave of your hand...must be wearing the gloves of course. )

5. Busted Sword Wooden Yo-Yo Slicetastic Yo-Yo

6. Slicetastic Yo-Yo HorroTerror Book HorrorSlice-Yo (You have no idea what happened to the other 'Yo' and you don't particularly care. You've just given your Yo-Yo Dark magic that's really all there is to say on the matter. )

Planet: Derse

Land of?: Land of Stairs and Mirrors. The stairs tend to go in whatever direction they please, whether it be upside down or sideways, and the mirrors seem to enjoy drifting around. It seems to be dawn all the time.

Consorts: The inhabitants of this land seem to be white cranes that do nothing but collect shiny things.

Associated Item: Berkelium

Exile: Once, he was a Distinguished Emissary from Prospit. He would gather the dirt on Dersite officials and report back to his Queen without a liked his job because he believed that in order to have a functioning society, people needed to be monitored so that they would follow the rules accordingly. After his exile, that gangly Prospitian became a Despairing Expatriate who now spends all his time collecting old videotapes, broken lenses, and things of the sort.

He rarely ever says a word, but when he does it's always important.

Sprite: LizSprite. First prototyped with your dead AuntieLiz. She was a little too energetic for a Frilled Lizard Lusus in your opinion, but still a good one. When you entered the medium you prototyped it again with a Troll doll by accident.

Likes: You LOVE horror movies of any and all kinds! You especially like the ones with suspense and a heavy sense of mystery, but the one with mindless gore are fine too. You like to read, but you can't do it for long periods of time. After a while your mind starts to wander and you lose focus and forget what you JUST read.

You have a strange fascination with BOTANY and are exceptionally good at it. You also enjoy collecting VINTAGE toys and knick-knacks even if all they're ever going to do is sit around in your hive an collect dust.

You have a not so strange interest in HYPNOTISM and like to think your good at it though you've never tried on anyone other than AuntieLiz

Hates: You simply cannot stand disorganization. Everything MUST be in it's designated area without exceptions. You hate the cold with every fiber in your being, and your hate towards the hemospectrum in general is as strong as any other lowblood's. You aren't quite sure if it's just because you were THIS close to being a midblood at least...but no. Lowblood status for you. It's a touchy subject.

But you hate nothing quite as much as you hate your idiotic Modus. You swear that thing could very well be your kismesis for all you know. It seems to mock you to no end.

Appearance: You keep your hair so that it never grows to reach your chin. Despite its shaggy appearance you do a good job of taking care of it and so it usually looks far cleaner/tamer than most other trolls you know. You're of average height for a troll, not incredibly tall, but also not a midget.

You have a lithe physique and you're built for speed rather than brawn. You tend to dress in an elegant fashion thanks to the influence of your Lusus, and if elegance isn't possible then you opt for casual in the least.

Horns: Your horns grow from the top of your head and sprout upwards, slightly bending towards the back so that eventually the two horns cross each other thus forming an X.

Personality and Traits: Mild natured for the most part. You like to joke around with your friends and are prone to using sarcasm at all times. Typically this is done in a friendly manner and comes across as amusing and even charming to your friends. On occasion it can be irritating and rude. Especially so if you're speaking with a stranger!

You are loyal to your friends, and dedicated enough to put yourself in harms way in order to protect them. Sometimes you aren't sure if this is good or bad though, because you aren't too sure what you'd do if one of them literally asked you to jump off a cliff in all seriousness.

Yes, you're trusting but you aren't stupid.

When you know you can't win you back down, and you always think before you act. You come up with any possible problems that may show up and simultaneously think on how to deal with them.

That being said...earning your trust in the first place is more of a challenge.

Relations: AuntieLiz ate your old Lusus. You don't really remember anything about that though, and you love her just the same. She was there for you when you needed her, and you were there for her when she needed someone to listen to her irrational ranting. She was so silly. You really miss her.

Pairing Permission: You can pair him with whoever you like my dear~

Other: Your Ancestor was the FoXower, and as his name suggests, he was involved with the Revolution. Or, well, the attempt at revolution.

(( Please excuse any typos and stuff, I'm typing this all in a hurry xD

And his name actually starts with an X not two L's haha. ))

Um, so i wasn't sure if this was the place to submit characters, but i'm sort of new to how fanfic so . . . . Yeah here's my Troll!

Name: Moirah Parcae(pornounced like it looks if u ignore the h. i needed one more letter to make it 6, so yeah)

Title: Phythia of Hope

Gender: Female

Blood Color: Idk if this is okay, but i wanted her blood to be that spot right inbetween purple and red, like it could go either way. If that's not cool, then her blood should be Cyan

Sign: Her sign looks like an eith note with a tail coming out of either side and underneigth an upside down triangle with a curved bottom is slightly smaller than the circle part of the note and there's just the tinest gap between the two shapes.

trollHandle:telesCandor

Typing Style: I tend t* replace my *s with these silly little things, and I als* have an afinity for STRING and SNIPPY remarks. (anything sweing or weaving related is capetalied)

Strife Specibi: Circle Kind (or hoop or ring kind)

Fetch Modus: Come What May (what comes out it up to chance)

Alchemize: 1. A flaming razor hoop 2. A lazer ring 3. A Ring Master costume (complete with actual stileto knife heels) 4.A single red predigree's ornament (because it's the equivalent of your eight ball)5. hoop top (in the center of the hoop a virtual screen that you can use to navigate stuff) 6. Ring top (also a computer holography tho this comes out of your ring)7. an ecceptionally pretty evening gown that is white with a low back and is very drapey and greek style

Planet: (where ever you need her to go really)

Land of: Collums and Islands

Cosorts: Obnoxious purple elf-spirit things that live in EVERYTHING. They're in the freaking rivers, in the trees, in the oceans THEY ARE WATCHING YOU ALL THE TIME (and they're mostly bitches)

Exile: Her name was Lorelei Rhine who was latter known as Lone Rider. zbefore she was exiled she was a dancer and loved flowers. She fell in love with a Derian Spy she met after one of her shows. Wen he was discovered she helped him get back to Derse. He never knew about her love fro him, but he knew of her great kindness and never forgot. For this she was thrown in prison and eventually she was forced into an audience with the queen. At this point she was known as Lousy Rapscalion. When meating with the white queen she lost her temper when the spy was insulted. Our young nimble dancer chalanged the queen to a duel. This dule ended in LR escaping on a black horse and riding away from the city absconding through the city with the queen's favorite weapon. She then rode to Skaia, always moving from town to town on horse back. However the heck they do it she ended up on the exile planet and there she continued to ride, her heart turned steel from the lonelyness, untill she stumbled uppon a strange metal sphere. The metal sphere had a strang asortment of wing blades surounding it, which reminded her of flowers. Finding this inquisitive she strolled inside and noticed on the screen that there was a young girl standing in her bedroom, completely aprehensive about the game she was about to play. At this discovery she makes a vow to help this girl not end up in the same position. LR smiles and types : Play the game girl, and take a chance against fate.

Sprite: She prototyped an automoton that she was aufully fond of, and is infact the only gift her lusus had given her (mind you this gift was completely and tottally meant to completely dissapoint her considering she's not big on technology)that she hadn't bashed into little bitty pieces.

Associated Item: Gold Coil looking things

Likes: Sewing and the Circus

Hates: People who believe in coincidence

Appearence: She is fairly tall and lean, with long thick hair. She pulls her bangs (which are a little too long) out of the way and pins them behind her head with a pretty gold pin she got as a gift on her wigling day. She's quite beautiful as far as her facial features go, but her abnormaly dark, large and pearcing eyes throw people off. It's like she's staring into your soul... Her cheek bones are high and defined, but not sharp. She enjoys wearing large amounts of decorative eye liner, usually bright purple-red, but that's the only amount of makeup she wears. She's a tiny bit more curvy than most girls her age (17), but sometimes her tall frame slims her out. Thanks to the freaky eye's however, most of her good characteristics tend to be over looked.

Horns: Her nors are large and curve directly over her head and bend in slightly forming a slightly heart shape (the horns don't touch though). At the base there's a loverly little taile like that of a music note on both sides (concave up).

PErsonality and Traits: She's very honest with people, almost to a fault (her chumhandle loosely references to perfectly honest). With her close friends she is insaily loyal, though becoming a freind of heres isn't an easy task. She's a bit withdrawn and usually has to be pushed into speaking with someone unless she's one on one in leads people to mistake her for cold, unfealing, and distant. Dispite this she loves a good fight, and is always the one to take the risk, loving the thrill of swinging through the air or flying or getting a bit roughed up so long as the other person was worse off. She beleives firmly in the fact that if it's meant to be, it will happen. however dispite this belief, she's extreamly rational and tends to analyze things subconciously. Due to this she has a bad habit of picking up conversations that were previously in her head, and stating conclusions without really realizing how she came to them. sometimes ideas and notions just pop into her head and she knows they're fact, but can't explain why they are. Due to this she gets snappy when people accuse her of making things up or not fact checking or asking repeatedly where she got this information from. She's pretty bad ass, and it's nearly impossible to beat her in a square fight.(this is if her blood is that difficult color) She's often more likely to side with the fact that her blood is of a reder nature, but if she wants she can sometimes use it to pull rank on more difficult high bloods. She doesn't particualarly like doing so though and lots of talk about blood tends to piss her off.

Relations: Here's where some of her personality makes sence. Her Lusu's name is Dea and is a peacock-troll combination. Moirah lovingly refers to her as a fucking gorgon-harpy (sarcasm). Dea constantly insults her daughter and in any kind of social situation, makes petty coments that are a bit more than passive agressive. This is mostly why moirah hates socialization much. Dea also forced moirah to undergo massive amounts of training, insisting that it was for her better. While it was, Moirah still resents it. The Lusus also constantly berates her for not understanding where these ideas and notions come from.

Pairing Permission: preferably with a member of the oposite sex, but yes i give permission.

Other: Ansester Obviously! Her ansester was Cassanas Archetrx or The Oricle. Always saw the future, but never believed that it was so, and died in an awfull and terribly grusome murder at the hands of her dearest freind. yeah ansestore (i got super lazy so i just ploped this in there. I can clarify/enigmafy things if you would like)

Oh, Oh! i wanna try a guy character!

Name: Alaren Zoriah (El- A – ren … Zo – rE- Ah)

Title: Rogue of Light

Age: 8 and a half sweeps (17 human years)

Gender: Male

Blood Color: Indigo (HoNk hOnK; SHUT UP GAMZEE)

Sign: looks like a stretched out number 8 with a line going through the center. A circle surrounds the symbol, and the lower circle in the “8” is filled in

trollHandle: alabasterSolaria (AS)

Typing Style: /-\l ren types with ne rly perfect diction, nd does use punctu tion. -owever, he never c pitalizes nything, prefers to repl ce the letter ‘a’ with the ‘ ’ sign, nd repl ces the first letter t the beginning of sentence with n ssortment of symbols th t sh pe to look like the letter (like “-” instead of “H”). -e lso h s the quirk of putting simil r words together, (such s combining “h te” nd “despise” nd coming up with h pise. be cre tive!), nd h rdly ever swe rs. _ses emotes frequently to express ll emotions! :D

Strife Specibi: Daggerkind; his general weapon is a foot-long blade made of alabaster, or a similar blade dyed white through the alchemizer.

Fetch Modus: Solarbox Modus; only works when light is present (stupid right?), but lets you retrieve what you what on the first try. Pretty straight forward, but a bitch to use at night.

Alchemize: list it!

Paper Tongue of Darkbeast Alternia’s Worlds Atlas Talking Map

Talking Map Telescope Star-Watcher’s Map

Hipster Glasses Alabaster Dust Darkbeast’s Eye White Hipster Glasses

Shooting Star Glass Bottle Vial of Star Dust

Vial of Star dust Ornate Dagger (weapon) Alabaster Star (weapon)

Planet: Derse

Land of?: Light and Ink; originally a recreation of the land of Ink and Thought, it soon took on its own name and became separate. Is light outside much of the time.

Consorts: most creatures are just referred to as nightbeasts and use poisonous ink as an attack, and most despise light, so you are safe 99% of the time.

Associated Item: Ink –or- dark matter. You choose.

Exile: A male, good-meaning heir (the brother of the cruel princess), disguised as a female witch to help the commoners of the land of Ink and Thought. No one knew his name. He was accused by his sister of placing a curse upon the land and therefore was jailed. Punishment was to be burned at the stake, as all good witch tales end. However, he escaped the dungeon during the attack of Bec Noir, and went into hiding until the new land was created, escaping into Light and Ink.

Sprite: Darelm-sprite; prototyped his little sister with a book, and forces himself to carry it around as a reminder of his royal past

Likes: Light, the stars, singing, helping those less fortunate than him

Hates: being alone, himself (quite often), the night

Appearance: Aralen, as all trolls, has grey skin and yellow corneas with blood-color irises. However, his skin is a lighter shade than most, giving an almost-dead look 24/7. His eyes are not sensitive to light, and he can go out in the daylight. His hair is black and is short except for a few undertone pieces, and contains an indigo streak in the back. His wrists are littered with scars from attempting to escape from the dungeon, and has his family crest branded on his left shoulder. He has three scratches along his forehead on the right side of his face from being attacked by nightbeasts during the trials.

Despite his land being always bright and trolls being sensitive to light, Alaren never wears pants, and instead opts for cut-off shorts that go to around knee length, frayed at the bottom. His shirts all have his symbol on them, and are normally just plain tee-shirts. He rarely wears shoes, and when he does, they are white ankle-length boots. As a reminder of his royal past, Alaren wears an indigo cloak of his father’s, his mother’s bracelets, and a pair of white hipster glasses.

Horns: Alaren’s horns jut out from the sides of his head and are at a slight downward angle. They curl around like spirals going in towards his ears, and are basically like flat spirals. Are actually quite thin and sensitive, and reach out around a foot away from his head at the furthest point

Personality and Traits: Alaren is fairly mysterious, but will spill all about himself to his friends. Despite looking and acting very tough and rarely speaking, he is quite emotional and gets worked up very easily over small problems. He dislikes people criticizing him and pouts when he doesn’t get his way, but never holds grudges and forgives quite easily. Alaren wears his blood color on his sleeves, quite literally; he cuts himself when upset. It take quite a bit to get him mad at anyone.

Relations: Lusus: an albino dark-beast ironically named Nightsky; around Alaren’s waist height, and he is blind in one eye. He sings when his charge is upset, and tends to Alaren’s wounds all the time, and his paws are purple.

Pairing Permission: yes! Pair away! Due to years disguised as a girl, Alaren is basically the human equivalent of a homosexual, and wants matespiritship with a boy, but can be forced into pretty much any relationship.

Other: nope, I think I got it all :)

Oooh! First chapter! This is soooo exciting!

You are a talented writer dear! The characters seem well done,especially since they are mostly not yours,and the use of commands was good.

When it changed from capital to proper capitalization though...more than one exile behind the scenes already? :)