Amazing work well done.

Intriguing.
Interesting, and full of the fire that one sees and yet isn't as easily seen in their eyes as one plays the game.
Very intriguing. I am highly appreciative of this.

Perfection! You have such a gift! I LOOOVE FENRIS!

Beautiful story! All the characters were very true to themselves. I loved the interactions between Hawke and Fenris, especially how non-verbal much of it was. Would love to see a follow-up to this story sometime if you're so inclined!

Hey 'The-Dancing-Robin,

I must say, I absoloutely loved your oneshot story 'Now' You portrayed Fenris perfectly, I thought, I can see him acting like that around Hawke, many 'Fenfictions' (as you call them XD)in my time and in some of them he is very out of character. It is rare that I review a oneshot because I find them too short (I know, oneshot, kind of a given but still, I'm more of a long story girl, I read them on occasion though :)) or when the author says 'Will not be continued' I get disappointed lol, but even though I'd really love to read more about this particular oneshot, I understand that writers block is a pain and sometimes, a good place to close is after one chapter when you feel everything has been settled, I'm going to add it to my alert in case you change your mind for whatever reason, I think you portrayed every character, not just Fenris, but Isabela, Merrill, Anders and Varric to a tee, you really have got this game down!

I hope you write more 'Fenfictions' soon, he is my favourite character in DA 2 for obvious reasons ;) Just wanted to say well done again, I loved this oneshot to pieces, it was very sweet!

and ps, sorry for the stupidly long review, I tend to go into detail sometimes and then it goes over the top lol! And sorry if none of this made any sense to you, I ramble, much like Merrill! Keep writing 'Fenfictions'! I hope inspiration comes to you soon!

TwilightxTanzie :)

Waaaaa this was AWESOME !

SEE why can't they put things like this into games AHOUEOGHEOISUREOSR, so angry. This was beyond awesome and just awesomely awesome,

lovely lovely! i love angry/scared Fenris and the tension between the two. hope you write more!

NONONO! why a one-shot? i want more, to see their reconciliation

Great story, I enjoyed this :)

Don't trust google translators.

interficere te omnia fruor - this is what you want.

Keep writing :D

Very nice! Love the tension between the two :) Possesive Fenris is always a nice touch ;) I think that this would be good to continue, it would be interesting to see your take on how they would 'make up' :D Good Job!

I love the raw emotion of this. It's so well-written. I think you've captured each character quite well.