I loved this so much! I didn't want it to end! Please for the love of all that is good in this world! Write a sequel

Wow... Great story

This was a truly epic and amazing story. By far one of the best Kouga/Kagome stories I have had the pleasure of reading. I greatly enjoyed it even though I had doubts for a mostly happy ending. Through out the story however I came across several typos, though nothing too awful. Mostly he or she where the other should be used and whelped rather than yelped. Each were rather easy to figure out and didn't detract from the story. Overall I enjoyed your writing style and look forward to reading more from you.

Overall, great story, but the constant wrong words drove me crazy, as did the overuse of exclamation points.

For the love of god, NO MORE EXCLAMATION POINTS! USE THEM SPARINGLY! Otherwise it sounds like you're yelling! Even when no one is yelling! Doesn't this sound weird to you?!

What a start!

please make a sequel

nice end, poor uncle...but the bastard ryoga still Needs to learn a lesson..

wow what a end of a fight in ch15...and how they found to another...hope that Ryoga(was the darker side?) gets what he deserves for what he did...maybe getting his own Body, a mouse without Magic...

yes she is acting like a easy women in ch5...its not right when sshe did learn about youkai rules...poor kouga...

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I've finished to read this wonder yesterday and almost forgot to review!

I just missed a few more touching scenes between Kag and Kouga, maybe one more chapter with them going back yo the wolf's den, Ginta/Hakkaku reactions and stuff. But this is and angst fic so not many fluffy/happy momentos are expected