Great chapter, well written, one thing though... You didn't say whether she put pajamas on. The way you wrote it sounds like she went to bed in her underwear... Not really appropriate for Severitus with her not an infant.

Love your work though!

I wish you ha finished this story. But now I must look up the end.

Got to admit Brogan was a hard name to adjust to, but it really has grown on me and feels meant to be

...Brogan? just no

Instant love? A bit much. Lust is more likely.

So now that Harry is a girl (and Snape's daughter) Snape and Bill are all so caring? Stupid gits! They should have cared before!

A beautiful beautiful story.

Of all the names in all the world, you named fem!Harry "small shoe"? Primrose (first rose), Cornelia (strong willed), Aurelia (golden), and Poppy (literally red flower) are ugly but Little Shoe is perfect? Really? That just threw me completely out of the story.

I'm liking this so far~

Interesting story so far!

Love it please write more

Lol Brogan is hilariously bad. Brogan the Barbarian! Brother to Bronan.
Well written otherwise.

I love the way you have Ron acting in this story.

Loved this and cannot wait to read the next part! ;o)

Okay the fucking 'stick his lemony fingers in' part had me like dying, I don't even know why. Like, all I cold see was Lemonhead from Adventure Time screaming and some long ass bony fingers made of lemon drops