10 de 10

Your book is adequate. This is a surprising lack of Aqualad fanfics, so I enjoy it very much

I love how you portrayed Brianna here. Most of the time, OCs or reader inserts from other fanfics would return and confess their feelings then and there but we all know that being confused is a more real reaction.

Lovin this every chapter!

Kaldur needs some love! I think it would be interesting if he would be paired up with Raven.

whooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo you go girl !

Awesome

confused Ember or Brianna who's going out with Aqualad ?

Omg i guess i would probably do the same but then feel bad .

well done mmm chocolate lava cake . I tried it once

Never horrible you have quite a talent .

Wonderful story. Write a sequel about their children and the team and the new th young justice and justice league.

I love this book! It was really funny and not so subtle when you put it Needless to say, it was the hottest night in the villa. But it was still pretty awesome:)

A short and sweet ending! I'm going to miss reading your replies! Thank you for writing this story! Your updates made my days much brighter! :)

Good chapter. I really did think it was a kid at first. Although, I suppose that's what sidekicks are for.

NO! NO! NO!

Its over! Damn it! WHY?!
I was both anticipating and dreading this. It can't be over. But it is. Yeah, it's a much better idea with the cat, way cuter than actual children. Then again, children are not cute at all.