Your story is amazing hope you finish this story one day tc

Your writing is amazing by the way. The way you have rewritten the hunger games in Gales POV is astonishing and I really hope that you write more fanfictions about the hunger games, Gale, Katniss, and Peeta, etc. etc. Please, please, please write more fanfiction especially about what Gale thinks of the second quarter quell. Well done!

I know it’s been four years since your last update but this story is a amazing and I really hope you could maybe perhaps give us our last two chapters

I know it been years since your last update
And your story is really amazing
It would be really nice if you could maybe give us our last two chapters
Tc

This is a great story and you captured each character's thoughts and reactions to the various events very well despite some inaccuracies in the story. For example, Linux was actually stung by the tracker jackers as well after the Careers ran off and I highly doubt he ever had a chance to take them out in cold blood.

I love the way you portrayed Gadge and how you explained that Madge didn't perish and filled in the gaps on how the way Panem moved forward after the rebellion which is not told in details in the actual novel. It would be great if you could finish this fanfic by uploading these last 2 chapters!

I just read your story! I see it's been a few years since the last update. I love it all so far! I love how you painted a picture as to why Gale's fire was so opposite of what Katniss needed. It's amazing :)

Gale thinks Cato's lucky? Take a look at Katniss.
First at the bloodbath, Tracker Jackers, explosion, Feast, finale

Unos de las mejores historias que he leído. Felicitaciones!

Glad to see you're finishing the story. The chapters are definitely enjoyable. Keep up the work!

I really like this fan-fiction. Its one of the best ones I have read. I want to know more about Katniss. I hate haw Gale and Katniss never see or speak to each other.

Firstly, it makes me very happy that there are still 2 more chapters to go...I don't want this story to end.

Poor Madge; it breaks my heart to listen to her story. How despicable of the Mayor to let the people of his own district die...and I guess his punishment is just (his house was the first to be bombed)...to mean to say?

For what it's worth, I'm glad he got Madge out, though he should've tried to help everyone. Sigh. But I love, love, love that Madge was arrested...and IDK why but no one's ever written that she was arrested for her rebellious acts. That's pretty cool...even though her dad paid for her to be out of there.

So glad that Madge and Gale are both still in love with each other. I also really liked their conversation about Katniss and the vote. You brought up some very interesting points. Love it.

Now who could be at their door disturbing their nice night to be? Can't wait for more.

love the book, what about Annie Crest and her son? where are they now?

Madge's fear, and her shame about what her father did, was just awful. I particularly liked the chapter name. Beautiful reunion.

Agreed I can't believe they cut her out. She started the Rebellion. She gave Katniss the Mockingjay Pin of her reaped aunt. And I am in no doubt she knew exactly what she was doing. She had access to Intel no one else had and she clearly wasn't a Town Princess, otherwise herself and Katniss would never have been friends. They should have had her just so she could be the one to visit Peeta in hospital.

I've enjoyed your writing immensely. You've captured Gale. I would challenge you to a write just the pivotal moments where Gale drifted from Katniss. Watching the destruction of twelve fueling his anger, working with Betee making him feel like he is doing something, deciding it was necessary and morally acceptable to entomb the nut. His immediate reaction to Coin's murder - I'll bet he didn't understand why at first. The final goodbye with Katniss.

Please say you will.

Excellent. Well thought through. Well written. Hence forth that is the Cato Clove story.