| Reviews for Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Legacy |
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   Le Roach chapter 9 . 12/13/2011 not bad, a bit of a short story, but still good, and if your making a series out of it, then that completely makes up for it. can't wait |
| Coli Chibi chapter 9 . 12/13/2011 OVER ALREADY! NOOO! Uh, sorry. Just kinda bummed. Never even got to see people chase Kumo out of town or anything. I just hope he and my other OCs will be in the next story. Other than that, I think the ending was a but rushed, but pretty good. So, are my OCs gonna be in the next one? |
| Le Roach chapter 8 . 12/12/2011 WHOA dude. Last time i checked it was just an OC submission sheet. since when did you post 8 chapters? whatever, all in the past now. Great job so far, I haven't found a character I dislike so far which is usually a huge factor in OC stories. i see you update regularly so i'll be sure to keep an eye on this. |
| wishbone23 chapter 8 . 12/12/2011 This chapter was pretty funny. That said, there is one mistake that you keep making. I find that a lot of characters say "Me and Jun" but the correct grammar is "Jun and I". Other than that you are doing a great job. I love the creativity put into this chapter. (like the Popsidrill for example). |
| wishbone23 chapter 7 . 12/12/2011 Hmmm. I do want a cookie... Is it a rampardos? Why not, right? Anyways this was another great chapter, looks like Jun made a new friend. |
| DoTheBartMan chapter 7 . 12/12/2011 Why is my such an A**h*le good chapter |
| Coli Chibi chapter 8 . 12/11/2011 No Beedrill were harmed, eh? Riiight. |
| Coli Chibi chapter 6 . 12/11/2011 Huzzah, Kumo! Glad to see him kick some butt! Update soon! |
| Coli Chibi chapter 5 . 12/11/2011 Kramzak was a beast. Awesome! |
| wishbone23 chapter 6 . 12/11/2011 Even more new characters, yay!(no sarcasm) This was another great chapter. |
| The Mocking J chapter 5 . 12/11/2011 Thanks for choosing Sky- I loled at letter! |
| wishbone23 chapter 5 . 12/10/2011 The plot thickens...Great job with this chapter. |
| NightFall-sensei chapter 1 . 12/10/2011 This looks kinda fun, count me in Name; Tekko/Male Species; Magneton Age; 17 Personality; No nonsense and a loner based on a natural hatred for him "abandoning his partner" when he was still on a team Alias; By other townspokemon "Outcast" to the night world where he acts as a vigilante "Blitz" Moves: Thunderbolt, Magnet Rise, Metal Burst, Tri Attack Clothing: None Notable Visual Characteristics; None |
| The Mocking J chapter 1 . 12/10/2011 OC Review Name: Karli (pronounced Kar-lee) Species: Kirlia Age: 15 Personality: Quiet, thoughtful, can come across as bitter and cold at times, warms up to people when she gets to know them Alias: Good Notable Visual Characteristics: none Moves: Teleport, Confusion, Calm Mind, Future Sight Clothing: Only a small red bracelet on one of her arms |
| Coli Chibi chapter 4 . 12/10/2011 Wow, Sala was scary. Nice! Oh, and if you need anymore OCs, I'm ready! |
