have to related to Gamzee, kind of. No matter how much I have slept, I will wake up at 5 with no questions asked.

I cant belive how well you integrated your fantroll into the existing trolls, its amazing and this story is amazing so please never stop writing storys :3 ok bye..

Thought I would post an overall review of the story at the end.
(( I read this in a couple of days I have way too much time on my hands ))
By the way I read your other stories over and over, they are all the best.

Anyways, the constant shipping may have agitated some people but I absolutely loved it. Some of the ships I did not agree with, but I couldn't help but see them as adorable even though I do not necessarily ship it. Johnkat I had always hated, but this particular story made it seem absolutely adorable.

I think you did a great job with your fantroll. I was never one for fantrolls but you seem to have developed her well and I can accept her just as much as I accept all the other characters of Homestuck. It would be pretty awesome if she was in Homestuck actually.

I was not overall happy on how you changed Eridan and Vriska, but they seemed to be nice characters. I was a little disappointed when they were not their usual selves, but I can live with it.

The two things that kept me reading were: A) Curiosity towards the ending B) Youre amazing writing C) How cute you made Karkat. I love to read Karkat fanfictions because to me he is just the cutest. You really did a nice job on him. Andrew Hussie could have written those logs himself I wouldn't be able to tell the difference. I only would like to mention that Karkat likes to use ridiculous metaphors for things. You can look back and see them in his pesterlogs.

I could see a few spelling mistakes through out the chapters, and once when you were referring to the Disciple you said "his", but they were easy enough to figure out what you were trying to say. It was a lot better then some fanfictions and I have to say you did a great job avoiding convention issues.

Overall, this story is absolutely great. Of course, all of your stories are. I will continue on to the sequel and I look forward to more of your beautiful writing. You can go far with your skill.

I will be recommending this to my friends 0u0

Second to last paragraph it says singless' troupe

OMFG

Thii2 made me cry, 2o much. I criied and cu22ed thii2 2tory out but iit wa2 2o completely amaziing
And ii have 2ome new 2hiip2 two add two my 2hiippiing lii2t
All ii can really 2ay ii2 that you diid an awe2ome job wriitiing thii2
now ii'm goiing to read the 2equel.

Screeching! What a wonderful way to celebrate the holidays! :D

Vris/OC

can/pail? really?

YES, fuck yes to a sequel! this is a great fanfic.

I must say, I'm hooked. This is a really great what-if idea, and I look forward to finding out what happens. I'm feeling a bit overwhelmed with the amount of information given in the first chapter, but I'm also excited with all the concepts given. Keep it up!

so wait does sollux get lose the wheelchair and what happens to the other seriosly i need to know more the suspince is killing me!

Why would Dualscar sacrifice himself for Feferi?

That was amazing. The battle scenes were my favorite _

My only complaint: trolls don't care about incest. That whole Vriska/Eridan kismesis siblings problem wouldn't actually exist.

Other than that tiny plot problem, absolutely fabulous.

Don't worry my friend! Your fans have waited this long for a sequel and we'll wait longer if we have to! :) Good luck with life my friend

Your Ninja,

Nami