I adored this, especially the twist ending! Hot and sweet.

I really really really love the way you write Misto :D

Very hot! Loved it!

Wonderful! It could have been shorter in the parts of the strip tease and when Tugger was waiting in Misto's room but at the same time I think it was needed. All in all, I simply loved it!

Alright, I admit to reading this while playing Skyrim ((between loading breaks, and pausing it every once and a while for particular paragraphs)) but I did enjoy it. I think you have pretty good descriptions for a lot of the scenes, and the way you built the world was quite interesting.

Though the last few lines intrigue me now as it appears they were playing a game of some kind.

The one thing I might suggest is making your paragraphs a bit smaller. As it is, they're pretty massive blocks of text in some places, especially the dances and it makes it hard to get through what looks like almost a wall. Otherwise, good job!

-Victoriousscarf, VS