OH MY GOD beautiful! I love it! thank you

This story was so good! I loved the developing feelings of Toshiro for Ichigo and Hyoinmaru guiding him. I love that everyone knows Ichigo's feelings already-though he hadn't voice it. There was so much continuous action no dull moments! Lets also give it up for Mama Retsu Papa Jushiro Brother Byakuya and Sister Rangiku! He has his own family and its great! I am like you as in Toshiro is my favorite character and I never get enough of reading fanfictions about him. (especially when paired with Ichigo!) so thank you for your creativeness and how the story had depth but stayed really easy to follow. Can't wait to read more of your stories. You are definitely being added to my favorite author list!

I just want to tell you this is an awesome story, and I've read it like a thousand times, thanks for entertaining me :)

That nice ending, good thing Toshiro accept Ichi's feelings, also glad that I go see a sequel, as the story was very interesting. :d

I loved it! Too bad it's over. I can't wait to see how the sequel is going to turn out :) I'll definitely be looking out for it :)

Wait its over? NOOOOOOO! This chapter was amazing, How dare he take Hyorinmaru! Huzzah for Ichigo savin the day and Toshiro got a new power(I think). I'm assumin he either wants hitsugaya kun or kurosaki kun but it'll be a mystery until the story is published. Thanks for the update, I look forward to reading your new one. Good luck wit the title. :)

Please please please update soon! I'm not usually a fangirl of this couple, but this has me very intrigued! Such a good story!

Just discovered this fic (well, actually just discovered the lovely Ichigo/Shiro pairing).

Love this fic! Hoping for an update soon!

The writing is a little bit hart to read with run on sentences. But it does seem to be getting better. I suggest reading over your chapters and going through at least one stage of editing before posting, it isn't hard. Breaks in the sentences, better wording and spell check would help very much. Please consider this for a better read. Though I must compliment you on the plot, it keeps me reading.

I liked the chapter was interesting, also have all the reason needed someone Ichi scolded him and made him open his eyes, I feel that this gave more Ichi security and it's time to show his true power and so to protect Toshiro of the hands of that detestable start.

So the story is gonig to end soon? Too bad, 'cause then I won't be able to read that much more f it.

Anyways, do you know how many chapters are left? Or are you just writing till the end with no real idea about it, like me?

Update soon!
Can't wait .

I loved Ichigo's inner monologue :) Character development

Wow that story is really getting good and interesting and nah that's ok I'm not complaining because of the grammar thingy and such cause everybody makes mistakes please continue please an Thank you

Nooo! cliff hanger! I'm so sad now, what's going to happen to Toshiro! I must say, your story is great and I'm never bored when reading it. It's fast paced and always exciting which is something I can't say for all Ichihitsu stories so I'm glad you wrote a good one like this