Please update!

More please.

Oh dang too bad the story ended with a cliffhanger but thank you so much for the (literal!) years of effort you put into this. The care that you had for this piece shows in every chapter and I am still amazed that you are not a native English speaker. I love the emotions and the interpersonal relationships you've put in here and I am glad I decided to read this despite it being unfinished. The premise is lovely and I cannot think of another fic that continues on in the future like this. The end developments are refreshing for their individuality compared to many other fics I've read before, including those in other fandoms.
Thanks again for writing

THEYRR BACK! Oh I'm so happy that Kagome got to see Rin again and that they can be a little family 3 3 3

Oh shit, blind trust in who? Ahhh! Also I have a feeling that this war will put a wrench in Kagome's and Sesshomaru's relationship for a bit

Oh no no one knows what it did! I'm definitely putting off work too much so I must return to my commissions but oof I want to read what's left of this unfinished story
Usually I try not to read unfinished ones but you've definitely hooked me on this one I am so happy I found it

Oh fuck oh shit what did she just accidentally do!

Oh heck this chapter was so good, I laughed when they were caught going into the council's meeting. There's something about one person being smug and the other embarrassed that i just really like

I know you said you don't do those scenes but you wrote it very well! You seem to be a much, much harsher critic to yourself than needed. Some amount is helpful to be sure, but being overly harsh on yourself isn't going to be great in the long run. You're a very good writer, I'm sure everyone else who reviewed or read can agree though I haven't read anyone else's reviews yet

Oh heck I reared up again

Holy shit, English isn't your first language? You write better than many native English speakers, that's incredibly impressive!

I love the semi silent rivalry between Sess and Koga! This has to be one of the best well written sesskag fics I've ever read which sounds like an exaggeration but your spelling, grammar, storytelling are all working in your favor for sure. I'm positive that if this was your writing years ago you must be even better now!

I don't think i have much time to read today but I'm damn well going to try because I really do love this story so far

Oh cute!

Oh that's really sad actually! But it makes me hopeful that she will get her fire back and that Sesshomaru will begin to court her