Beau. Ti. Ful! haha Athos lost! PERFECT WORDAGE! super sweet as it shows exactly their building of a relationship to D'Artagnan! 'since he told us his name' SQUEEEEE!

Hi tere,

just wanted to stop by and say how much i enjoyed this fic. English is not my native language so i can't offer much constructive criticism, but still. Fun to read and hurt D'Artagnan is my favourite. _

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heeheeheehee, Porthos is so sneaky-I was waiting for him to do that to Athos! I've never seen the movie, but have heard and read various things. I'm a sucker for filler so even though I have no idea where in the film this could be it's still a good stand-alone scene that shows the varying degrees of awkwardness, care, and bonding where it comes to new friendships. Good read!

Wish the movie had gone more this direction. Loved it but the movie was sadly lacking in character development :( anyways, loved your story!

Wow! This is really good! I love how you write the different characters. You capture their personalities very well. I hope to see more from you soon!

*le squee* Omg. That was amazing! I've read a lot of "first time writing" fics, and let me tell you that this - this is amazing. It can be hard writing for a fandom that you've never written before, but this fic flowed so well and was so in-chaarcter that you'd think you'd written several 3M fics before, not that this was your first!

Especially loved your banter between the boys, and specifically between Porthos and Athos as they talked about D'Artagnan. Really, really great.

I SO hope you decide to write more for this fandom, because I for one would love to read more of your fics! :)

Lovely story... I especially liked Porthos in the end how he was trying to convince Athos to finally admit it :D And poor D'Artagnan you got him slightly drunk.

Yeah, you joined the writers D I really hope you continue to write for the Three Musketeers because you do a good job and everyone was IC. This was a nice little story to read. Again, I like how everyone is writing filler for the new movie. It's fun to read ;) Good luck on your group presentation. And say The End if you want to LOL ;)

Nicely written, well done. Athos just can't admit openly what he thinks.

Did I detect a hind to some kind of interesting relesionship with Athos and the d'Artagnans. Maybe it was just me. )

First review! You say you've never written before? That's a shame, because this was EXCELLENT. I absolutely adore "filler" stories like these which show all of the behind-the-scenes moments that the movie lacked. Everyone was spot-on in terms of character, but I especially loved how you wrote Porthos here.

I also liked how you mentioned that D'Artagnan might be feeling slightly homesick; it makes perfect sense, since he's lived with his parents in Gascony up until now. And the ending was adorable! Oh Athos, it's no use trying to hide it!

I truly hope you write more; you have a lot of talent and it'd be a shame to waste it!