Well, i guess davejade is canon now! Well, slightly more canon than davekat which is a little more canon than johndave... holy shit whats wrong with Strider and getting all the canon ships!? Oh wait thats right, he is a motherfucking Strider that is why!

These collections of DaveJadeDaveS makes me squeal,,, i soo love the way u depict their relationships and how they intereact and mingle and even the trolls! :DD
I hoope you'll continue to write more! 3,,, i feel like i need to have endless amount of stories and chapters about davejade to satisfy me,, no pressure or anything wonk,,
Welp, seriously thou, i really appreciate your writing style and character portrayal. C:

that was beautiful

Hihi I was umm well wondering... weeellllll... did you stop writing for this ? :S Because i love it and it's at almost a cliffhanger and its wonderful and you should really write more of this wonderful stuff

I love you for writing this like qbwghjnbvkfcls

Rose was so spot on it was absolutely wonderful. I think that's the most in character I've ever seen her outside of one of Latia's fics. Excellent job with this so far, I'm liking forward to more chapters. C:

Whew! Another long read! w

Haha, Jade's just goin' around to everyone, saying hi :D

Loved the little KarkatxJade moment, if it was supposed to... I also like that pairing, and am not seeing enough of it XD Haha, cute when he gets red thinking Dave was watching them q

I think having a love triangle with Alpha and Beta(?) Dave would be interesting :D I mean, if you had Dave liking Jade from the very beginning, which is the Alpha Dave we now know as Davesprite, then both he and Beta Dave would like her... obviously causing issues :0 So I like that part at the end, which Alpha glaring at Beta X33 Haha, and so cute how he wraps his wing around her~~ and yet she thinks of him as Mama Bird :c

I like how these this story is a bunch of different ones w

BLUH this Davesprite stuff is killing me! Must stay strong.

May I just say you are an awesome writer, keep up the awesome work! c:

Aw, Davesprite! D,:

*feels guilty she didn't initially like this ship*

Anyways, back to reading! c:

omg the part about davesprte being a mama bird and then dave being a nest was soooo funny! lol nice chapter cant wait for more

Ah, so that's how it's happening! Dream bubbles within the island dream bubble; very clever, I like this idea a lot. :) All the visits to the others' dreams were really cool, and seeing Jade meet up with everyone was interesting. I think I love John the most in this chapter, though, the pantry full of Betty Crocker crap and his intrusion on the hug were magnificently hilarious. xDD

And aw man, this Dave and Davesprite thing, I don't even know who to root for here. ;; Jade and Dave getting closer to each other and bantering in the dream was lovely, you could really tell how differently Jade acts towards him than she does towards anyone else. But then Davesprite getting upset and showing bitterness about being the 'real Dave' or not, I just... so many feelings. ;_; Great job, Sifl! I look forward to more of this. :D

Alright, so let me see if I have this correctly. Rose ended up not battling Noir right away and was on her quest bed when he came up and killed her, ascending her to God Tier. Dave followed canon route, was killed by Noir, and ended up piloting out and creating the Green Sun (or was Rose still there? Wasnt quite sure). Terezi convinced Vriska to stick around long enough for Gamzee to show up and kill her temporarily, so she hasnt died but has lost an arm permanently again? And now they are in a new universe, bypassing (or perhaps merely fast-forwarding) the alpha session. Im not quite sure if thats possible, given that a scratch resets their universe rather than letting them create a new one, but perhaps Im reading it incorrectly or jumping the gun.

Either way, I like the set up youve got here! The Bec-wolf, John and Dave being bromos, the unexpected Karkat-Dave friendship and Dave-Vriska enmity, the exposition about Terezis psyche; all of that was excellent stuff. And of course, the upcoming DavexJadexDavesprite triangle is already looking delicious. The blanket-wing was a cute touch. :) I will definitely be keeping an eye out for this story. Great work!

Dave fight!

This.

This was GLORIOUS. D

This made my day. Thank you for writing it! :3

needs more sloppy make outs x;

Pretty damn high, Dave, pretty damn high.

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