| Reviews for It's A Start |
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   Mandarin Fiend chapter 15 . 6/26/2014 aww no ending? :( |
| Mandarin Fiend chapter 4 . 6/26/2014 I really like the story so far, just one question: any reason the whole thing is is italics? |
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/1/2013 It's so intense I wanna see the other chapter already unless I can't see but I want the other chapter yes I wanna know what happens now ill wait for it ok |
| Zuchiku chapter 15 . 3/31/2013 I really liked the idea of the split Gohans to show his two sides in a different way than other fictions and the way they agreed to work together in the end. But so much effort on the two Gohans part to save her and than he decided to let her get killed. I wonder what this would have done for Gohan and Videls sanity especially with an image of Gohan killing her. I'm a bit suprised that he doesn't seem to figure why she's so afraid. To bad your never finished. |
| Silva chapter 15 . 10/17/2012 When are u posting the next chapter? |
| A Changing Persona chapter 15 . 8/2/2011 Seriously... Do they not remember what Babidi did? What the fake GOHAN did? He..he..he... Sometimes I wonder if the only sane one is Vegeta... |
| Kitten Kisses chapter 15 . 6/21/2007 Holy crap. I can't believe you never finished this! I think Gohan's rather acting IC considering the situation. You know, sometimes it's hard to tell. The part with Gohan seeing "himself" kill Videl was really horrible. The story was just really getting awesome where you left off, too! O |
| cjeddie chapter 15 . 2/25/2006 Excellent Story, though it would be good to possibly see the next chapter as it is a bit of an anti climax to end with Videl afraid of Gohan and it would be good to see what happens next. CJ |
| ViciousFilly chapter 15 . 2/8/2006 Maybe he is a bit OOC, but then having your personality split will do that to a person. I do hope you update soon. |
| Ava chapter 15 . 10/27/2005 Why haven't yo updated? This is one of the most beautiful stories I ever read, you can't just leave it like that! Do you need any ideas? I can help, my e mails is if you ever update please e mail me. I know you are a active author because you have uptaded other fanfics. Also, if the reason for the lack of updates is that you have lost ur love for dbz, I think that is not true. You have created a world, a whole world different from DBZ, you can't just leave it like that! |
| Shway Norris chapter 15 . 9/11/2005 just wondering if your gonna continue/finish this story. it's on of the best fics i'v seen for a long time and was actually becoming somewhat of an inspiration for me. just thought you should know the effect your fic has on it's readers. |
| SoulOfALioness chapter 15 . 7/14/2005 Oh... my... KAMI! THIS STORY IS SO GOOD! YOU JUST HAVE TO HAVE TO HAVE TO UPDATE! Your such a good writer and the plot is genious! I seriously cannot wait 'till the update! This story is just too good to not update asap. Also I would like to commend you on your lovelly long, detailed and well plotted chapters, not many people do good long chapters anymore and its a real treat when they do. Exseptionally good story, keep it up! |
| Gohan577 chapter 1 . 6/22/2005 Come on! you have to update, this is one of the best fics I've ever read. |
| Kisa-kun chapter 15 . 4/29/2005 AH...! You can't stop here! You can't! Please! |
| fireeyes chapter 15 . 4/15/2005 Oww please update soon. Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please. Thanks a million. |
