| Reviews for Love is Loyalty |
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Destinies Entwined chapter 10 . 6/27/2012 Haha! Yeah! I love how you incorporated the title of the story into the ending. Thank you so much for this happy and now complete ending! :-) |
PokemonFreak90 chapter 10 . 6/27/2012 What nice ending to a great story. I love FMA family moments. |
Cupcakke4206969 chapter 6 . 6/27/2012 I have always loved RoyxRiza pairings but you have taken my love to the next level! |
Destinies Entwined chapter 9 . 6/23/2012 I'm a little bummed that you didn't give the story a proper ending. I do like this story a lot, but a good ending should leave the reader with some kind of closure. The way the last chapter ended didn't really feel like the end of a story. If you were ready to end it, and didn't want to write a full chapter, you could have pulled a JKR and do an epilogue that jumps to a future point. Oh well. |
Destinies Entwined chapter 8 . 4/28/2012 What a wonderfully sweet chapter! I'm so glad that royza finally made up. Urey and Nina's godparents the future Mr and Mrs Fuehrer, yes? O.o |
PokemonFreak90 chapter 8 . 4/28/2012 It's nice to see the two of them patch things up, just in time for the baby's birth. And it's also nice to see this story getting back on track after so long. Good work, once again! |
Fukuko-chan chapter 7 . 3/2/2012 AWESOMENESS ! pretty please update soon ! XDXD |
Riku Nanase chapter 7 . 2/17/2012 update soon i love it please contiue |
hanatchi chapter 7 . 2/5/2012 Your story kept me hooked and is still keeping me hooked! The way you portray Roy and Riza is beautiful, you really capture their emotions perfectly. I myself am a big RoyAi fan so I was already happy that I could read a fanfict about them. I'm even more pleased that I could read such a great one like this too! :) I am urging you to release the newest chapters even though it may seem like a task *smile* but your story does bring so much happiness to my heart. Keep on writing!~ |
Destinies Entwined chapter 7 . 1/30/2012 YESSAH! I freakin' LOVE that you are using the Ed/Win childbirth as a means to get Roy & Riza to face each other! EFFING fantastic! Great writing, love how you had the flower lady finally spill a few of the beans... teehee! so stoked! please keep up the momentum! This is a point of no return as a writer, not until you get to the GOOD stuff. one more chappy (or two)and you've gotten over a certain level of "build-up". |
The Sand Alchemist chapter 7 . 1/29/2012 Love love love! Please update soon and thank you for the little info on flowers, I think I just found a valentines day gift! |
Purrvana chapter 7 . 1/29/2012 Good story |
AnimeRomantic4Ever chapter 6 . 1/6/2012 I love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter. |
The Sand Alchemist chapter 6 . 1/2/2012 hey...soo...PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
royai fan 757 chapter 6 . 1/2/2012 omg i read all this in one go. it was amazing and actually surprisingly very much in character. i really really loved every bit of it, the flowers and poems were extremely clever and it broke my heart when riza was crying :) ur a talented writer. hope u update soon. and i suggest making riza put up a fight, like slammming the door in his face or slapping him, u know :) itll make it more fun. |