This story is amazing.
So sorry about your brother. I know this probably won't help but he is in a better place now.

Wow

NOOOOOO JEROME NINA GRAN WE MISS YOU! 3 3 3

To me this story was so sad. But you did a great job writing it. Amazing writing...

Well way to bum me out

I thought this was really good. I know how this feels.

OMG. This was so sad! I started tearing... I am sorry about your brother as well. Please write. You are an amazing writer. I know for a fact your brother won't want you to stop. Please.

that was so sad but so good..im sorry for ur loss

Hey! I like the story and I'm sorry for your loss, I understand how you feel. I lost my older brother(he was in his senior year) this year in September. Its hard but know that your little brother's in a happier place. If you ever need to talk, PM me

This, was like, seriously good. It almost(ALMOST!) made me cry. Wow. I'm just a-mazed at your work. Nice job.

First, I'm sorry for your loss. Second, you said you wrote for your brother. So, why stop now? Its not like you could ever forget him, and I'm sure he would like you to keep writing (even though I never knew him). Write for his memory, because he'll never be truly gone. In the words of Dumbledore, "Death is but the next greatest adventure." Again, I'm really sorry for your loss. Hope I helped, even a little.

I'm so sorry about your baby bro :(

your story was beautifull and very dramatic... I enjoyed it so much... your brother would've love this story! :) R.I.P to him

I'm really sorry about your brother; but I know saying sorry doesn't really help. My cousin was in the hospital because she got in a car crash two weeks ago, and she's in a coma and everyone's pretty much lost hope.

Anyway, beatiful story. It's really dramatic and gets your emoticons stirring, and I love that ;)

I'm really sorry about your baby bro and i wish that he could read this awesome story that you made for him before he goes up. :'(

sorry bout your brother