A very sweet and touching story! I loved the plot and character developments. Felt that this could've developed into a longer story however. Nonetheless, the plot was fun to read

Brought tears to my eyes! Well done!

*happily melting*
I loved this. *sighs happily*
...So much that I want to hug you. *hugs*

I loved this, and admire the amount of work that you put into your stories 9histories, hats, etc.).

*internally squealing*

*grinning* Taisho is so protective. XD

XD I love it.

*squirming happily*

I love the Taisho's reaction. I am always so happy to see him and his reactions to Ren included in a story. Thank you :D

Didn't you say that she no longer lived in the Darum-Ya but in a secure building?

Marvelous.

I wanted to cry when Kyoko ran from Ren. I liked that he acted before Kyoko realized that she was capable of loving and that she loved him. It was different and very nice.

That was cute! It wasn't too short, or too OOC, though Ren did have his moments towards the beginning, it got better quickly!

Some of the ideas I've seen here are newer to me, the actual act of Ren trying to win over the Taisho, Tokyo Disneyland, going back to threatening her for frogs, it was refreshing to see someone not do everything that's already been done a dozen times.

The one problem with this I really had was the last chapter, where you said create your own image, now I have the scene where they're whipping the cows to make whipped cream in my head! Ew!

Anyway, it was good! Thank you for sharing!

Yet another perfect story! I loved the ending and laughed throughout all of the chapters! :D

Akutagawa's going to the Daruma'ya! XD

awww what a wonderful story. i love it!