Reviews for Daughter
Nox Counterspell chapter 1 . 4/23/2018
Wow, I mean, wow.

I'm just speechless. I really really feel the frustration Shifu is emanating through out all this fic. I mean, it's impossible not to. This perspective is interesting. It's a noble gesture on his side to try to steer his new kid on the right path, but he saw the pain of an unloved child and in his actions he never really amended that void in Tigress-

Jesus take the wheel, too many feelings, I loved this.

(I just checked the published date of this... 2011, OMG time flies)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2016
Very good...!
purpledragon6 chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
*heart clenches*
sonbra chapter 1 . 12/16/2015
buaaa buaaaeee esto es tan tristón
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2015
eso es mucho sufrimiento
The Song Has Spoken chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Whoa... Heavy. Very nicely done, quite a heart string tugger! Nice.
Aronim chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
This is good. This is actually great.

And I will never understand why you need to pick a side in that issue. Shifu did some wrong, but for understandable reasons. And as long as he realizes this and begins to try, then there is no reason to condemn him.
Naiatra Equatron chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Wow.

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I honestly don't know what to say...words cannot properly express what I just read. It was...beautiful! I could really feel Shifu's pain, all he has to go through when he doesn't what will happen to his daughter. It so sad I couldn't help but cry while I read - yes I did cry. Oh I loved it so much!

I hope you continue, I really want t know what will happen to Tigress. Oh please!

Again, loved it.
potsugi-deactivated chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Holly shh- I will never be able to watch that scene in the movie where she's a little cub without thinking about this. What a wonderful story, really: full of emotion and very well written...

But damn, I'm gonna cry ._.

Is perfect. One gets to feel really bad for both of them. At first I kept thinking "shifu, you're such an asshole!" But now... poor guy.

Also, is just obvious that he would be proud of Tigress, she's badass as hell \(3)/
Shadows of a Dream chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
Stunning, vivid, gripping, and emotional. Some errors in tense, but STILL - a fantastic work of art! :) I mean it!
Blue Autumn Mist chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Oh my...that was so beautiful; I wanted to cry. I could really feel the regret Shifu felt. And I think you captured his character very well.

This story really tugs at the heart. You did an excellent job! :)
Dunas Priest chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Aahhh ;A; This was amazing.

It's just so hard to find great fics of Shifu in it, but this one pretty much nailed it. I love how you captured his coldhearted exterior and his inability to express his emotions, even though deep inside he does truly care.

I look forward to seeing more of your stories!
WrittenOnTheSubwayWalls chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
I could actually feel a tight pain in my chest while reading this. Brilliant. I also liked that you didn't give away all that was going on concerning Tigress's condition.

This has a "in the moment" feel to it. You really grasped Shifu's regret and uneasiness. The way he criticizes himself for what he has done, yet almost completely defends his actions using the Tai Lung excuse.

Beautiful oneshot,

Love it!
FyreDragon5 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Oh wow.

I honestly am not sure on how to properly convey what I just read. It was...beautiful.

I love the detail and the emotion you were able to capture in this one-shot. I could literally feel the pain, anguish, and regret that weighed down on Shifu, and I must say that it fit perfectly with his character.

The way you were able to translate his emotions into the written form was absolutely astounding. I know this is a one-shot, but are you planning on continuing with another one-shot maybe? I don't want to make you feel like you have to, but I would really like to know what is going to happen to Tigress.

I'm a sucker for the father/daughter relationship between Shifu and Tigress, and it breaks my heart to think that Shifu won't get the chance to tell her how he really feels about her, and how proud he is of her.

This story is just so heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time! How do you do it?

Anyway, wether you continue this story or not, I LOVED it, and I hope to read some more of your work soon!

~Fyre~
dontshowthistomyfriends chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
I felt pain in my heart for both Shifu and Tigress when I read this. It was brilliantly written and it touched my heart. Incredibly amazing story! D

-crAzY jAkY
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