Reviews for To Mai Surprise
RCook chapter 15 . 1/22/2015
I really like the idea of adding the other gods to this.
RCook chapter 6 . 1/22/2015
Should we be worried that it is Brian? I mean I know you said that his dad was a pride leader but...
TakaSobieFAnka chapter 22 . 9/3/2014
Love the ending!
But seriously, I had soooooo much fun reading all of the chapters! You are an amazing writer!
Raven J. Haile chapter 22 . 1/19/2014
This was amazing. I am sad about Valentina and Babushka but the children were adorable. I am excited to read more of your work. :3
RoseSilver999 chapter 8 . 11/9/2013
Yay, the chloe/alek/brian/mimi thing sorted itself out!

Hmm... 16 y.o sleeping with a 19 y.o...

NO! ALEK GOT SHOT! D': I can practically feel the knife, you backstabber! Everything was going so well but NOOOOO someones dad HAD to overreact and Alek HAD to get shot! D':

Lol. Sorry if it seems i hate you. I dont i think youre awesome. Sorry bout your boyfriend... damn friendzone. The guys say THEYRE the only ones in the friendzone BUT THEYRE WRONG. Every day thousands of girls are thrown into the terrible pits of rhe friendzone (doesnt that setence sound like an infomercial? Lol. Weird thoughtsmy brain) And also sorryfor that unneeded rant on friendzones... im stuck in the aquaintance-zone. IT SUCKS IN HERE.
RoseSilver999 chapter 6 . 11/9/2013
ITS OFFICIAL. I HATE YOU. FOR BRINGING... THAT... *THING* INTO YOUR STORY. Ahhhh! :'(

Also its so cute how clueless alek is. You never see him like this cuz hes usuallg all cool and collected (and cocky) but now hes a few different words beginning with c: confused and clueless :D
RoseSilver999 chapter 4 . 11/8/2013
Ooh, a twist! Ive never read a story where rhey switch places... i like it! Well.. unless you decide to make mimi be a beeyotch and try to destroy my chalek bubble of happiness. Then hate everything that exists :'(
RoseSilver999 chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
Ooh this sounds good! I love when people write along the original storyline- its so much more fun to read than to watch (well except for aleks gorgeousness/britishness *insert fangirl sigh here*)
AJ Garcia chapter 8 . 10/28/2012
Just a quick question...

Did Mimi tell her dad that she...uh..."stopped" herself from having a baby? I think her and Brian would have had a cute babies! :)
laurensyd96 chapter 22 . 7/25/2012
This was really good and original. But very good also
htb5694 chapter 22 . 6/18/2012
Just finished the story I have to say James is a wonderful name.
htb5694 chapter 20 . 6/18/2012
BABY BOY! I feel like a girl would would be nice but I can imagine a boy more. For names (these are all Russian) Levka or Mikhail or Andrei or Demitri.
Of Chaos and Mischief chapter 22 . 3/18/2012
I just read this story all in one go and I don't regret it at all. It is a fabulous work and you did a lovely job with it. I loved how you switched things with Alek being Uniter, Brian being Mai and etc. Fantastic story. :)
GRITS girls raised in south chapter 22 . 3/18/2012
I absolutely LOVE this! I wish you would somehow continue it. Like fill in the time between chapter 21 and chapter 22 with flashbacks or something.
TwilightFreak28 chapter 22 . 3/17/2012
This story was truly amazing and always will be!I hope that would possibly continue this incredible story or write an epilogue:)Loved it!
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