Interesting. Will you be continuing this?

Very good- I liked it.

I really enjoyed this. Boo for unfinished stories.

Would've liked to have seen more of this. Well developed first chapter.

Wish you would have continued this. It's really good. :)

I LOVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZ

Is there a story here
I Lilly and veroncia are they both going to die
Is logans old man going to kill veronica and lilly

This fic would have been EPIC if you had continued. Gosh!

Really good start. Veronica is oc. But exactly what she was pre series so you captured her pretty perfectly. And the little Logan part made me squeel. I actually don't hate your lily who covers her vulnerability and doesn't really want to hurt others.

Really, Really liked this! The characterizations are spot-on, fast-moving action, suspense, a little romance - I hope you keep going with the story!

Please, please don't abandon this story.

Hmmmmmm, I'm liking where this one can go as well. Update in the future? :) So far, I'm loving what you've got...

plz keep writing

Nice. I'm really interested to see where this goes. Veronica is going to have fun trying to keep Lilly from doing anything stupid with Aaron. Good luck to her. :)

This was really interesting! It's the first story I've come across where Veronica wasn't disgusted with Lily for her affair with Aaron and where Lilly seemed to actually care about her friendship with veronica, a lot of stories on here, have her ditching Veronica and replacing her with Madison or another O9er so I really like this, because I think it seems very in character. Also I love how you've still paved the way for Veronica to become the Veronica Mars from the series at the end there, maybe a bit less bitter and vengeful though lol update soon!