i will claim as HEA.

This was really cute! well done! :)

This was really cute! well done! :)

Now I'm torn between asking (begging) you to write a sequel, or at least an epilogue where they meet at university or just leaving it as it is because this was fantastic. Well done!

BEAUTIFUL STORY T/T

This was absolutely great! I loved it, it was so amazing! You are an amazing writer and it is so compelling to read. I truly enjoyed this. Thank you for writing.

nice story...r u gona continue it?

"It wasn't there fault." - should be "their"

NICE tie back to the poster. Oh the ever-omniscient Isshin. LOL
Really sweet story with a nice combination of humor & fluff! Thank you. :)

"Ichigo wanted to groaned and chuckle" - should be "groan"
"wondering is she should continue;" - should be "if"

Love the interaction with Karin & Yuzu.
That's good Rukia texted Byakins - shows she's not totally irresponsible & selfish in her escape. :)
Haha - Toshiro won! XD

"He wasn't sure what to say passed that" - this time it should be "past" :)
"side of the pin" - should be "pen"

Oh Yuzu and her innocent adorabubbliness! Oooo...Ichigo was set up? Scandalous! LOL

"had it been a wise decision to allow such a disgraceful girl into the ranks of the Kuchiki clan?" Ouch. Harsh.

"might have past as a wave if one was focused enough to try and discern it's intent." should be "passed" and "its"

Apparently Ichigo didn't learn his lesson about bunnies...? o.O LOL

Cute start to the story. :)

Too bad this was the end! Great story! Truly brilliant 3 Loved it.

HitsuKarin 3 ahahaha xp I LOVE THIS STORY! It keeps me smiling xp

lol this is too good xp