Reviews for All Good Things
jay-t-dawgzone chapter 29 . 5/26
Binged you story today. I love your storytelling and the inclusion of supernatural elements in this story. Both this fic and The Promise are really good.
jay-t-dawgzone chapter 29 . 5/26
Binged your story today, love your way of storytelling and the use of supernatural elements in the story.
Ji Hyun1 chapter 29 . 5/16
Beautiful story. I love it
Green Eyed Girl chapter 29 . 5/5
It's so sweet and you made me cry...
Oh, I love this story so much.! :*
Guest 22 chapter 29 . 10/20/2018
First off, thank you for seeing this story to the end!
And... HATS OFF TO THE STORY IDEAAA!
The idea is sooooo unique! I was immediately intrigued after I read the summary!
Good job! And keep it up!
The only yhin
Quen chapter 29 . 6/15/2018
Beautiful! I love it! I'm happy that they ended up together happily..
Thank you for this story. I love it
Yolo97 chapter 29 . 8/6/2017
Godyou're so polite
I loved your story
sonder this chapter 18 . 6/8/2017
Interesting premise, almost kind of a twist on Beauty and the Beast where Sakura's character is the latter. However, there were some things that were puzzling; it's hard to see how Sasuke came to love the old Sakura even though you tried to show us that there were sides to her that she didn't show publicly but her obsession with the social image, materialism, and how she blatantly decides the worth of a human being based on their reputation and then treats them like dirt seem to far outweigh most of her good points that it was hard to see things Sasuke's way. No matter how long you have known someone, just seeing how that person treats people in such an abysmal way should be very disconcerting especially when it conflicts with your own compassionate principles which I presume you had implied for Sasuke's character.

In this chapter, you had Sasuke agree that it's not so bad that the memories of current Sakura were replacing the precious memories of the past one but that goes against the very definition of "precious." If you hold something dear then you would not be okay with having it erased. It's alright that he finds the current memories now valuable too but to have to choose - I do not think he would be okay with the idea of replacement (just look in the canon series, Sasuke held onto his past with the ferocity of a thousand bears). I understand you were trying to bring closure to the distance so that he could finally talk with Sakura again but the solution did not seem fitting.

As for the pace of the story, I am glad that it's been a very slow bump with more of a focus on Sakura finally growing into her own potential while struggling to be the only one who remembers anything. One of the hard parts about storytelling is balancing "mundane" events with events that actually move the story and the characters and unfortunately I felt the dialogue and events have been too, well, ordinary. Yes, this is highschool and it is good you are keeping things realistic but most of the conversations seem to revolve around 'What are you going to do for break, How was your break, Cool okay bye, are you going to prom, are you going to this person's party, how was the date...' and so forth. Understandably, you are trying to go for a real world effect and maintain a side course of side pairings but several chapters of How is so&so can bring forth a sense of stagnancy and it just seems more like the semester (and indirectly, Sakura's timeline) is marked by holidays and highschool events.

Hopefully, that made some lick of sense... I am not trying to put down your writing. I believe constructive feedback is more useful to a writer than just mere praises so I hope you'll consider this with an open mind. If you need any clarification, I will try my best to clarify.
rosymini18 chapter 29 . 4/9/2017
wow! Honestly it was probably one of the best story i have ever read. I love how the story wasn't rushed and i loved the ending. Love it!
XxX chapter 29 . 11/11/2016
That was really great! Quite heartbreaking at some point, yet the ending was so sweet! I really loved Sasuke and Sakura's interactions. It kinda made me miss high school! Amazing job!
FruttiKiwi chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
Thank you for providing this story for us. It's wonderful and I really enjoyed it. :)
Bananarock509 chapter 29 . 7/12/2016
Gosh, I love this story so much!
theeuniverse chapter 29 . 7/10/2016
Thanks for not abandoning this story! I was binge reading this the whole day. I'm so glad I did. Ah, the feels. I love your works! :) keep it up.
zmartknight chapter 29 . 7/8/2016
I love this story. Glad I found it. It's amazing. Hope you'll write more stories like this.
caslspirit15 chapter 29 . 7/8/2016
Love it! I'm all about the sappy ending cause I agree Sakura had plenty of hard moments. Can't believe this story is done but loved every step of the way :)
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