Love this so much! For a few chapters I was thinking 'this isn't that angsty' and then oh boy was I crying about stupid Jasper calling it quits. Love that Bella tried to get him back, but then realised it wasn't just her fault they broke up. And love lots of happy fluff to end it with!

Love that last paragraph. Feels really real because I know that feeling of I want to cry, but not here so I'll just hang on until I get home. Very sad for Bella, Jas is being way dramatic, hope she's gives him hell!

This was a great story! Love Bad-ass Jas!

This story was awesomesauce! I was sucked in from the very beginning. Seems you love you some Jackson as much as I do. Plus you doubly won my heart by sending Jake to Clemson. I bleed orange, have my whole life. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing piece of work with us.

Loved it so much! The writing, her sarcasm, the way the characters spoke...loved is not a big enough word.

God, he's hot. The fights, the sex, his nervousness...just Jasper.

This is really well done. I'm loving it. I think I've come across it a time or two, but typically don't read much AH. This, however, has me captured already. Can't wait to meet your Jasper.

this story, fuck. it’s left me at a loss. this is the most well written, amazingly plotted story ever, and i just... wow. this is by far my favourite work i’ve read and i just. im a mess, because this was so well written it like took a piece out of me to finish it. fucking astounding, and i love how it’s real world. you don’t deal in bullshit fairytale stories and i appreciate that.

Aww I loved it. I honestly devoured it in maybe 4-6 hours ish and I want more. I loved the witty adorable Bella and sexy sweet talking badass Jasper. I wish there was more to this would you consider doing a sequel?

Damn that's rude. Sorry for your loss. My son recently graduated high school as well, congratulations! Write what you can when you can! Merry Christmas.

I am enjoying it. I like your writing style.

I really enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing.

Ugh this Jasper is amazing! The things he says and does not only makes Bella’s heart skip a beat but mine as well!

I love your story and the characters but the best part about it is the witty comments Bella makes through the whole thing there were very few chapters where I didn't laugh out loud every 3 lines or so!

so I simply devoured this story. I came across it by complete accident and i don't regret it. thank you for writing an actually story, you know if you changed their names it wouldn't even resemble twilight. it was very good.