Please update i will be waiting !

Daaaaaang...Riku basically made Sora his bitch

NO! RIKU YOU BASTERD OU TAINTED SORA!

What? That's it? That was incredible! you should continue it!

That was pretty cool, in a nice idea, sort of way. Not cool for Sora, though. I really liked how you portrayed both possessed Riku, and Sora all the way up to the point where he lost his light. It kind of sucked to read about Sora losing his light considering how much of a hero he is in the game, but this is fanfiction and anything can happen.

Anyways, I really liked the ending a lot. It was like Sora was still trying not to give it, but he did anyways. So yeah, really great job. The only thing I think you need to fix is all the places you have your where they are meant to say 'you are' you should have 'you're'. That and I think it's Bastian not Bastion. Other than that, you did well as far as I can see.

Great job. :)