I enjoyed this story and I can't wait until the sequel.
Though I hope we get to see a Tango version of Dani from the original DP canon. I love that small kid and I wonder how Daniella would bond with her.

Wonderful! ;)
Update immediately, please!

I haven't read the original but I love this one and I'm pretty sure the other one would have been as good. I can't wait to read the rear of the book

Wtf

OMG I LOOOOVE THIS FANFIC! The writing is amazing and the idea is genuine! I love this so much I can't put it into words :D

It may be worth it to have a whole other story slot while your rewrite goes on. Titled Tango Rewrite. I have seen a couple of other authors do this in the past and it caused the least bit of mayhem and made it easier for the readers to follow along. Then once they finished the upload they changed the titles to remove the rewrite and put original on the other one so that readers could go back and see a previous incarnation of the story. It may seem embarrassing to have an old version up like that, but it gives proof to younger readers that you really do need to revise your work at some point.

And it is nice for both you and the readers to see just how far you have come as a writer since that first posting.

Good luck with the rewrite. I look forward to seeing more chapters.

RFYS!

Pterodactyl

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have to ask to me this story seems to be danixdanny

Was it just wishful thinking when I saw potential Danni/Clockwork?

Now i must beta ha sequel! So you can wrte more, and potst more! Yaaay! Hehe, im so excited!

You left it off very well, closed things off, but still left if off a little open for continuation as you want it to be. Very well done.

I am curious about how come, danni and phantom want to be one-minded and thn split. Just seems like a step backwards to me, but thats just me. Hurray for sequels!

I am catching up! One thing i forgot to mention earlier, when vlad asked about who hthe halfa duo had met with, you said Elliot. Hes human, do you want me to change that?

Another awesome chapter fulled th wonderfulness. Poor daniella. She has it all confuzzled as to whats up and whats down.

What do you have in store for my muse, dear jayrose? What indeed...horray for the new installment by the title i dare not reveal!

Question, why wasnt phantom marked in all that time before Dannic? I like how you made that new power have a limit, clever

But omg! I would have thought Vlads master would mark them, not HIM! woah!

Nother question, does the mark transfer to the other half or is Danni technically free?

such a sad chapter. too bad i already know it gets worse... so evil, aren't you?

Hurray! They finally split themselves!

What's the sequel called?

Oh, I loved it! Can't wait for the sequel!(: