The beginning was rather interesting. I liked the dream at the beginning, it was really sweet. :) Please update soon, good job. :)

super sweet go on!

This chapter was alright, glad they finally had sex. I'm also happy that Draco was gentle with her. Though her mentioning You Know Who while going at it was just Ugh! I don't know how he was able to continue after that, just saying. I'm glad that Rayetta got to see her brother and Ginny at least so she isn't completely cut off from the outside world. Please update soon, good job. :)

really good keep going!

I honestly don't think it was necessary to include the entire lyrics from the songs on here. I think maybe the first verse and the chorus would've been sufficient honestly but that's just me. Alright chapter but a little bland it almost seemed like there wasn't much point in it, maybe you should've included Ginny and Seth's visit in it so there was more to it. I like the idea for the story so far though so I'll keep reading it. Please update soon, good job. :)

Wow that fast already? A little unbelievable honestly since they acted as if they didn't like each other much in the first chapter. I mean I know things can change but I don't think it would change that quickly. Pretty good chapter still and I like that they are setting routines and whatnot. If I sound too harsh, I'm sorry, I'm not trying to, I'm just being honest. Good job. :)

Not a bad chapter, interesting to know she is the Princess of Spain. I figured she was royal when Snape mentioned the crown but good to know where from. It sucks that poor Draco is being butt raped by Voldy though, that's kinda gross. Hopefully that won't happen again now that they are in hiding. Good job. :)

Well this is an interesting start but I think we should've been given a little back story about this OC we are in the head of. We were just pushed right into her PoV without knowing who she was or anything like that so it'd be nice to find out a little more than she's in Gryffindor, friends with the Trio and Ginny, and that she's got a small crush on Draco. It's a little annoying that we have no idea who we are reading about, just saying. Good job though. :)

really sweet go on!

I like it so far, keep it up

really cute go on!

really good please go on!