Pls continue

Pls more? Pls?

So good

Its An AMEISING Chapter as ussaly but i was wondering if you have drooped the one piece storys or if they are on Hiatus Then PLEASE P.M ME T_T

Yes they are reunited! Please please please update soon!

Can't wait to see what happens next so I hope u update again soon plz.

loved it I think your what-if this was changed and this and this was slightly diffrant stories

Super cute! Love your devil fruit idea too! :D

i can't wait to read the next chapter

HEY DONT LEAVE ME HANGING FINISH ITT!

are you going to update any of your one piece fics, i like where they're going so far.

Love all your OP fanfictions! Especially all the original devil fruit abilities for Luffy. This DF in particular reminds me of a cross between Anise from Tales of the Abyss and Chikusa from Katekyo Hitman Reborn! lol I know you haven't really updated a lot you OP fanfiction, but I hope that you will eventually go through and continue writing! For the end of this chapter, I was expecting Luffy to be angry and feel betrayed that Ace hadn't reached out to help her during the kidnapping. I really want to see Luffy's reaction when the group confronts Crocodile. I can picture a brotherly and protective Marco shielding Luffy. Hope you continue this and many more of you OP stories!

I've gotten quite interested in your stories now this one is just as interesting as the others. I really can't wait for the next chapter and then its following this will be quite an enjoyable read. So please update this story and the others soon I can't wait to read them.

Luffy could be holding on to Ace's leg during the whole fight against mr.0

aww...