Reviews for Unexpected
iisAnonymousperson chapter 8 . 10/16/2019
OH MAN I LOVE THIS! Are they going to take Sensu and Gansu home or will they stay with the Gaang? And the fallout of Zuko lying and Katara blood bending Zuko! Also, is he okay? Cause he seemed weirdly okay with Katara killing him?
Guest chapter 8 . 5/14/2018
Thanks for updating.
NatNicole chapter 4 . 5/15/2018
I like this story! Very creative & realistic What If? plot.
While I know Katara feels betrayed, FACT is that Zuko DIDN'T betray her in the Catacombs; she has no right to assume that just 1 civil chat automatically means he woulda joined with his enemies instead of with the people whose love he has wanted for his whole life!
Arashi Uzukaze chapter 1 . 5/13/2018
Wasn't Zuko's arms broken? Yet it seems you forgot that.
FairyRave chapter 7 . 6/14/2017
GAAAAHHH!

I just found your story today, because lately I've been craving to read ALTA fanfics. Mostly involving Zuko as the main protagonist (who wouldn't?) and not focus on romance. Zutara fics are okay overall and I have nothing against the ship, but why are there so many! I just want a good adventure/self-discovery/angst type of fic to read and cry over.

Sorry, for my ranting. Anyways, I definitely love your storytelling. How you presented Zuko predicament in the first chapter was brilliantly executed. As I read on, it just kept getting better and better from there. I kept on smiling at all the Sokka and Zuko bromances. There should definitely be more fics about those two. Also, you adding Gansu and Sensu to the mix was a pleasant surprise. Like a really, really wonderful surprise.

Overall, brilliant writing. I'm happy to read that you are continuing this story as well. If you didn't, I wouldn't know what I would do besides pondering my existence and torturing myself by reading the whole fic several times.

I'll be patiently awaiting for the next chapter in the mean time.

~FairyRave
Guest chapter 7 . 5/4/2017
Good chapter keep up the good work
Arashi Uzukaze chapter 7 . 5/3/2017
No worries. Just continue and don't give up.
Scarviex chapter 6 . 1/25/2016
Great story, you really should continue it even though you haven't updated in a long time. Still, even if you don't continue it keep writing great stories!
Squibble the WhovianBreadstick chapter 6 . 6/22/2014
oh yes! continue!
Vi-Violence chapter 6 . 4/24/2013
Please update soon!
ArrayePL chapter 6 . 3/30/2013
I suppose Zuko still wears the bandages on his head? Otherwise he and Sokka would see that his wounds are healed now. The chapter was very interesting and I hope you will update sooner next time :)
amuto1 chapter 5 . 3/14/2013
i really like this story please continue to update i would like to know what happens next
Jessenia-chan chapter 5 . 2/12/2013
This is an amazing story with great plot and awesome character development, I am extremely excited for what is next. Please update soon!
foofoocuddlypoops99 chapter 5 . 2/8/2013
Keep writing! When will Haru use the truth cactus thing? PLEEEZ keep writing!
Elise chapter 5 . 1/3/2013
Very cool!
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