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Shiranai Atsune chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
Name: Rockette Winters (English)
Yusaburu Suishou (Japanese)
Rockette Froste (English)
Yusaburu Fubuki (Japanese)

Nickname: Yuyu, Yusa, Yusa-chan, Yusu; she calls everyone by their last names without a suffix (excluding Endou, which she calls him Endou-sama and Fubuki, whom she calls Fubu-kun)

Age: same as Fubuki

Gender: female

Appearance: Long black hair tied into a ponytail, two white-colored locks of her hair are dangling on her shoulders. She also has light (near sky) blue eyes and regular colored skin.
(Galourmore Captain: white-colored dark blue shirt with white captain's waistband. Her number is 10, which is written at the back of her shirt. She has a black wristband on both wrists, grey shorts, long black stockings and matching sneakers.)
(Casual clothes: blue sweater, tattered and ripped shorts as well as black school shoes)
(in GO, her hair is longer but the bangs are shorter. She wears a tan coat, blue sweater, tattered and ripped jeans as well as black low-heeled office shoes)

Personality: distant, cold, silent, is always seen reading book and practicing soccer on her foot, she wanted to show her emotions but was too stubborn to share her feelings. As the series progresses, she becomes dense and more open to her teammates. But when she’s playing soccer, she becomes violent, strict and intimidating.

Crush: Fubuki Shiro (gets married to him in the future)

Past: The hardcore captain and first female captain in Galourmore history. She's cold and determines to put them into top shape to win the championships. She's a member of top striker groups in Galourmore, being in the co-group; Elements. Each one of them control all four of the elements, so far, only being four members- her and other three. Galourmore specializes in nano-technology that enables kids to have super-speed/strength and accuracy. So far, only the elements were able to be successful while the others...not so much. Once they've learned the truth in Galourmore, they immediately sent themselves away by purposely failing. They enrolled in Galourmore High, because if they don't, they would be taken away their abilities (which would also kill them). So far, they've only manage to get one of the cures. They were told that if they win the championships, they would be cured. So far, after she joined Raimon, she doesn't seem to get along with them first. The only ones she got along with was Shiro, Endou and the managers.

Other:
Flaws: Sometimes gets a bit too overconfident and violent, intends to freak out and lose control, gets tired easily, a bit too overconfident about herself. She has a fear of small spaces and worries a bit too much.
Hobbies: reading, writing, playing the violin, playing soccer, throwing ninja stars, secretly reading romance novels and manga
Number: 10 (Galourmore)
22 (Raimon)
Position: Ace striker and team captain (Galourmore)
Forward (Raimon)
Team: Galourmore (Former)
Raimon (Present)
Techniques:
The Comet- shoots the ball comet-like. The background is a cosmic outer-space-like place, she jumps in forward to the ball, jumps behind it after lifting it up by her heels, then kicks it with the behind of her right foot.
Crystal Cannon- there's a snowy/blizzardy background, she lifts the ball up into the air using the front of her left foot as snow covers the ball, the camera closes up to her left side, then is seen kicking the ball.
Blazing ball- In a fiery volcanic version, the ball bursts into flames, then using her ankle, she kicks the ball up into the air, then, she flips backwards then kicks the ball using the back of her foot.
Air Blast- The background is a blue sky with clouds (or anything else depending on the weather), she lifts the ball into the air in a massive speed, then after two counter-clockwise spins by going around it, she kicks the ball in a ballerina-like way.
?- kills. STILL IN PROGRESS. UNMASTERED.
Abilities:
Accuracy: 5
Speed: 4
Strength: 3
Stamina: 3
Fun Facts:
She left Galourmore for Raimon to find the cure herself; she doesn’t want them being burdened with her.
She acts like a mother practically to everyone.
Yusaburu means 'Rock' and Suishou means 'Crystal' and Fubuki means 'Blizzard'
Pronounce 'Rockette' at 'Rocket'
Has quick ninja skills which she learns in her free time.
After Raimon and Galourmore's battle, that Endou showed her the true meaning of strength and skill, she began to respect him well. (Going as far as calling him Endou-sama)
Mizuhara Yukie chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
I look forward for the next chap
SHSL Kariya Masaki chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Yuu: Wow! This the start of a really good story! I love the plot so much w I will submit myself so I can see more of this awesome story O

Name: Nakamaru Yuu

Nickname: People call her Yuu-chan, Yuu-san or Yuu while she calls everyone with a simple kun/chan/san, etc.

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Appearance: She has shoulder length, wavy, light brown hair, sky blue eyes and a peachy skin tone.

Personality: She's a very caring person but sometimes, she could be power hungry. In most situations, she tends to blurt out absurd ideas and express her feeling in an odd way. In short, she's sort of crazy 8D

Crush: Utsunomiya Toramaru

Past: When she was five, she lived a normal life, had good parents, etc. but that all changed when a stranger came to their house and stole everything in their home, including her family. Ever since, she's been living with her cousin, Tachimukai Yuuki

Other: Well, she is afraid of ghosts because of a scary story that Tachimukai told to her when she was young and she's also afraid of airplanes and heights. She LOVES sweets and is also Hiroto's best friend.

Now for the Past thingy whatever that is...

Past Name: Sato Yukiko

Past Personality: The same as her personality above

Past Lover: Kiyama Hiroto

Past Life: She was abandoned by her parents when she was six so she stays in Sun Garden ever since

Other: She's very sleepy and very lazy

Hope I'm accepted and good luck with the next few chapters! W
baa-baa black witch chapter 2 . 12/17/2011
This chapter's so cool. I hope to read the next chapter.
Artistically-Free chapter 2 . 12/16/2011
Kinda short but I'm sure you'll have more time to write a longer one~ Great chap
lou-haru chapter 2 . 12/16/2011
Nice one! And thanks for accepting my OC! Hope you'll update soon :)
soapscent chapter 2 . 12/16/2011
Sachiko: Thanks for taking my OC!
Princess Of Flames chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Hi can I join? wished i have seen this earlier. any way i hope you accept my OC.

Name: Amathyste Aori

Nickname: Ama-chi, Amy-chan

Shuuya-kun (she calls Goenji) Mamorou-kun,

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Appearance: She has knee length silky black hair with curls in the end, She has grey shades in her hair and her bangs are small that cover her forehead, She has blue eyes and fair skin.

Personality: She is a kind and caring girl, she is kind of a nerd but no one knows that. She can be rude and mean when she gets angry, she is more tomboy than she is girly

Crush: Axel Blaze/Goenji Shuuya

Past: She is childhood friends with Goenji. She lived a miserable life filled with pain and sorrow, but after met Shuuya she was a whole new person

Other: She knows about her past life but it is buried deep in her head. Her hobbies are playing soccer, martial arts. By the way she is a martial artist

Past Name: (could be different or the same)

Past Personality: She had the same personality except for the being rude and mean part. She use to be sissy and sort of a cry baby

Past Name: Angel Anderson

Past Lover: Goenji Shuuya

Past Life: Her life was normal till a man came and took her parents away from her

Other: Same hobbies. She doesn't remember much but at times she gets glimpses of her past.

I liked chapter 2 it was good
soapscent chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Name: Aoi Murasaki

Nickname: Called Blu

Calls others by the suffix -chan or -kun

Age: 15 16-ish

Appearance: Short and thin, fragile looking. Pale skin and short black hair. Big blue eyes and wears a sundress.

Personality: Anxious, cautious, and a worry-wart. Always smiling nervously and easily startled. Somewhat oblivious.

Past name: Sachiko Nakamura

Past personlaity: Angry, sad, vengeful and tsundere. Willing to help others. Sensitive but doesn't show it.

Past lover: Hiroto

Past Life: She was an ornithologist studying in Tokyo when she met Hiroto. They were engaged, but she died in a car accident.

Other: Blu is afraid of Gouenji for an unknown reason, but actually, his dad was the one who killed her (by accident) in the car crash.
Mah Fer chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Name: Maria Matos

Nickname: Mah and Mah-chan and puts people in the name of "chan" or "san" for girls and "kun" for boys.

Age: 17

Gender: female

Appearance: Is the height of Toko, has black hair smooth going until the middle of the back, dark green eyes are more clear when you cry, fair skin, is lean, is very beautiful.

Personality: optimistic, smiling, generous, loving and strong.

Crush: Shiro Fubuki

Past:when I was 8 years was in Teikoko until his house was raided by bandits who tried to kill her but her parents in order to protect her were killed in front of your eyes, when they were about to kill her also the police arrived and arrested the criminals, as I had no where to stay had to stay in the house of his grandparents and after moving to Raimon and since that day she began to fear blood only to see the fact already beginning to tremble and reminded of their parents. She has a sister who is studying in London.

Other: she does not know about his past life, but since their parents' death she began to have strange dreams about his past.

Past Name: Midori Matos

Past Personality: gentle, happy but a little would be powerful, and honest.

Past Lover: none

Past Life: she was a powerful priestess, used a bow and closes and a sword capable of purifying the monsters of his time, had healing powers, and lived a protected village when it was attacked by horrible monsters and in order to protect her younger sister new was killed by a stab wound to the chest if the body was cremated and buried in a shrine to honor her.

Other: to be a priestess always had contact with the spiritual world and she could see parts of your life.

I'm sorry if I wrote the wrong word, Is That I am Brazilian and I passed by the text into Google Translate Portuguese
ChocoMiyu6040 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Hello...This is Kazami Miyu using a collab account...I'm busy so can you save me a OC spot PLEASE! And can my crush be Suzuno Fuusuke! THANKS!
Mizuhara Yukie chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Name: Mizuhara Yukie

Nickname: a. none b. Ryuu-chan (Midorikawa)

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Appearance: Long white hair, silver eyes and white skin

Personality: She is a polite and nice girl but always very quiet. She is a quiet girl, not very open up to people she son't know and always timid when talk to them

Crush: Kiyama Hiroto

Past: She used to be a cheerful girl but when her brother, Mizuhara Yukio died when save her from a car accident, she became quiet and not be able to open up to people. She is childhood friend of Midorikawa and he is the one who know about her past and her brother

Other: She get unconcious sometimes because of her weak body and always have a dream about her past life. She love animals

Past Name: Iris

Past Personality: Same but she used to be more cheerful in her past

Past Lover: None

Past Life: She lost her parents when she was little and live in forest with animals, her only friends

Other: She don't like adualt cause she cannot trust them
Artistically-Free chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Mind if my OC joins?

Name: Amaterasu Shizuka

Nickname:

a. Shizuka, Shizu-sama, Shizu-senpai

b. Ends everyone's name with a "-chan"

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Appearance: She has long black hair that reaches her mid-back. The front right side of her hair covers her left eye. She has white highlights on her hair. She has red eyes and wears heavy mascara. She has really pale skin and uses red lipstick. She wears a black kimono top that she cut it in the middle. She wears a white tube top under the black kimono top. She wears black pants and black 5 inch heels.

Personality: She is the silent type of lady. She only talks once she is spoken to. On some cases, when she gets drunk, she gets happy and talkative. She appears mean, cold and sly due to her loss of a loved one but in the inside, she is a kind person. She is also a loner in big groups and mostly stays cool. She also takes things seriously.

Crush: Edgar Valtinas

Past: Amaterasu was born in a wealty family. Her life seemed to be perfect, but it wasn't for her. She wanted her father to awknoledge her. Her father didn't seem to care enough about her due to his business. He never came home and she only saw him around 2 times a year. For some reason, he always favoured her younger brother more than her.

When she was 9 years old, her 5 year old brother played soccer one time in their backyard. She accidentally kicked the soccer ball up in the tree. Her younger brother insisted that he would climb up and get it but Amaterasu said that it was too dangerous. He didn't mind her warning and climbed up. He tried to reach for a branch when he was near the ball, but failed and fell down. Amaterasu caught him in the nick of time, but causing her legs to be paralyzed for a period of time. She used a wheel chair for 5 years until she was 14.

She met Edgar by accident when he accidentally went in her room while she was reading a book. He got the wrong room number due to the nurse's bad eyesight. He immediately said sorry and couldn't stop staring at her. She was shy at this moment so she covered her face with the book she was reading. Edgar 'flirted' with her and they started becoming best friends. Then one day, he asked her out and she said yes of course.

During those 5 years, she stayed in the hospital and on occasions where she would use her wheel chair to go out. Her younger brother felt that it was his fault and played soccer on her behalf. He would always feel the guilt in him when he sees her face, so he fled the town and is missing until now.

When she was 14, she began to go to physical therapy to cure her legs. After 5 months of successful therapy, she regained her legs and began to walk again. She then played soccer again and immedietly became good at it. Her father finally awknoledged her as a proud father once she completed her goal of becoming a soccer player.

(To summarize it: Her father didn't like her, she broke a leg and was in a wheelchair for 5 years, got cured and was able to walk again and then dated Edgar)

Other: She a little about her past life but she doesn't know stuff like her past lover or her past life. She enjoys to be with Edgar and be with Alexander (her 2-year old kid). She has arachnophobia and enjoys eating cake.

Past Name: Valentina Roxas

Past Age (I just included this): 28

Past Personality: She was a silent person. She was calm and never got angry. She would get enraged if anybody would steal her books. She was also kind.

Past Lover: Goenji Shuuya (I'm not sure for his past life name...) (Anything can happen, right? XD)

Past Life: She was born in England in the Victorian era. She was a normal classed lady and enjoyed writing books. A war broke down and she was the cause of it. One of her books included some personal information about the enemy and they tried to kill her and bring down her country. Her kid, who was 4 years old, was killed by the enemy and she then committed suicide.

Other: -

Hope you accept her and if you have any questions, feel free to PM me :)
Shouko-Marigold chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
O.O A-W-E-S-O-M-E! Wooooooow, you are VERY creatrive, I had never imagined one fic like that. Lets see what happen. Ehhh can you acept my OC? If dont it doesnts matter:

Name: (first last) Kamali Taitani.

Nickname: (who calls your OC that, what does your OC call others) All call her Kamali or Tai-chan. Only Handa calls her Kami-chan. And to the others for a strange reason most of the time she call them with an "shizu" at the end of their names.

Age: (16-18) 17

Gender: Female XD

Appearance: (please give in details) Has mid-back curly brown hair, purple eyes, is tall and her eyes are VEEERY expresive even if she doesnt talk. Always are wearing something blue or white.

Personality: (please give in details)she is too shy, friendly, a bit pesimistic, responsible, reliable and a perfecionist person. Most of the time is unhappy but suddenly start laughing

Crush: HANDA *w*

Past: (please give in detail, but don't be too dramatic): jaja, I will try. She lives only with her mother because her parents get divorced. When she was on kindergarden one day she met Hiroto, but she is always remembering him, as if he was her brother.

Other: (does your OC know about his/her past life,hobbies, likes, fears, motto, anything!) She think she could

had been studied astronomy because she remember several excursions and photos about stars, meteor and those kind of events. Actually she enjoys eating vanilla ice-cremas, playing piano, learning French and Italian, she LOOOOVEEE fairies and cloudy days.

Past Name: (could be different or the same)Helena or Maya.

Past Personality: (could be different or the same)almost the same but a bit rebel and MORE talkative.

Past Lover: (could be your OCs or not)she rarely remembers someone named Marcus and I looks like in a similar way to Handa.

Past Life: (please give in detail)besides astronomy, botany was very interested for her. She lived (or she thinks) near to a castle and always went to prepare tea with her medicinal herbs to the kings. In gratitude, the gave to her a telescope. She thinks she had lived in London or in India. And she sees Hiroto like her older brother.

Other: (the same or different, does your past life know about his/her past life) the same.

Well, thats all. If you need more information, send me a PM please. And congratulations, the introduction and the general idea of your fic is INCREDIBLE. Lots of hughs.
CutiePieSakura123 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Can I PM you my OCs?
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