Awesome, thanks.

These stories you guys write are always all kinds of hot, so that goes without saying.

One small thing stuck out to me though, and I suspect you didn't realize it. At the beginning of the chapter, Alex is wearing a "wintergreen dress". Olivia is said to be wearing a maroon dress which is low cut in front and back. However, later in the chapter you refer to Alex wearing a plum colored dress and Olivia is in a shirt and black blazer. I'm guessing the wardrobe change is a result of collaborating, but I figured I'd mention it.

My opinion on the clothing, unsolicited though it may be, is that Olivia should definitely be in pants and a blazer (sexxxxy) ;-)

Totally enjoyed this one!

I agree with one of the posters here. I was not feeling chapter 2. Alex is in line for a really huge career and if Olivia truly loved her, valued her, would she honestly jeopardize that for sex? Also, again, agreeing with the other poster, Alex's submission is special. Chapter 1 emphasized how Olivia felt about being the only one who got to see Alex come undone like that. Who got to witness and experience Alex's complete submission. As for Alex, being a strong woman, I would imagine her submission was a private thing, something she ONLY gave to Olivia, so... to allow another person to see it... to touch Alex... not only exposed Alex, but objectified her. Even in the most extreme BDSM relationship... if true love is present... objectifying your partner is part of the SCENE, and wouldn't or shouldn't be portrayed in front of others, ESPECIALLY your submissive's boss. One more thing, Olivia, withholding her affection to appear to be more in control and more dominant was out of character. I would think Olivia's mindset would be... who cares what someone else thinks? Every time this story spoke of Alex needing to connect with Olivia, Olivia denied it. That's just sad, not a turn on.

Chapter 1, was hot with a little angst from my point of view. Chapter 2 was exposing and objectifying. Of course, this is just my opinion.

Um, yeah... this was fucking amazing. Really, insanely hot!

I love this story! I can't tell you how many times I've read it. I thought after the billionth time of reading it I'd better leave a review for the both of you. Would love to see you both write another collaboration. This fic is hot (okay super hot) as well as loving, you made the combo work really well guys

Wow! I loved it.

Absolutely loved it! And I believe Liz should definitely pop up more often during their little trust ;) it was definitely hot and I do live Donnelly so :)

chapter 1 was HOT. 2 i'm not really feeling; I get possesive and think olivia's instinct shouldv been to cover and protect alex. At work alex is commanding, she trusts only olivia to see her otherwise and even if it was a huge turn on for a moment its going to affect her work and olivia should have thought of that. Also alex letting go so completely should be so special to olivia that she doesnt want anyone seeing her like that. And letting her touch alex just then, i think not.

Just my interpretation.

Omg, I can totally see that happening! I love this story and I hope you two continue to collaborate!

I like it. This chapter definitely didn't evolve the way I thought it would, mostly in reference to how Olivia acted. And I love the character of Liz Donnelly and how people tend to use her in these fics, but yours pushes it to actual observation instead of her just being generally aware of Alex and Olivia's sexual relationship. It's an interesting direction.

Wow. First, the intro was spot on. Love the jealousy. Liz seeing them wow and the end where Trevor got the panties haha. Made me laugh!

PS: love Olivia in charge and Alex calling her mistress wow... xD

Wow that was intense and seriously hot. I love the Alex/Olivia/Liz. They always stir up hotness. :) Hope to read more stories from you soon.

Wow! That was terrific! You ladies write very well together. Keep it coming please,

Love it! Looking forward to the promised part two.