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Portal Princess chapter 1 . 4/17 is rambling sorry I posted too early |
Portal Princess chapter 1 . 4/17 I like how the baby kicks Wheatley when he |
seajong115 chapter 1 . 1/24 *RUNS INTO THE FANDOM THAT IS MORE THAN 7 YRS OLD* AM I LATE? |
PhoenixFantastic chapter 1 . 2/6/2019 Too cute! Oh, this is too cute. I'm dying of cuteness. Wheatley's going to be a great Dad, I just know it. The only way this could be better is if you could write a short bonus chapter that shows Wheatley and Chell holding their baby for the first time. I know this story is kinda old, so it's just an idea (that I would totally adore if you could do it). Thanks for writing! |
Kim chapter 1 . 11/25/2018 Oh this is amazing! You should be an author, I'd read all your books! Could you do anymore portal? |
Lucy chapter 1 . 9/29/2018 I cannot state with words how much I love this ficlet. It's so sweet and beautiful. Not only is it Chelley but it's them having a kid! This is so calm and quiet and sweet and yet just so wonderfully funny. Just incredible. Thank you so so much for writing this amazing, beautiful, stellar fic! |
User724 chapter 1 . 9/26/2018 "I did that, me" Nice throwback there |
User724 chapter 1 . 9/26/2018 Any thoughts on what the baby looks like? for some reason I imagine her as Melody from The Little Mermaid 2, probably because of the whole "Human-Newly human Romance" thing. I've written 2 stories featuring this baby, hope you don't mind. |
imsherlockedx chapter 1 . 1/10/2018 this made me smile |
detectivejigsaw chapter 1 . 1/6/2018 *Proceeding with melting into puddle of goo operation* My favorite part of your Portal fanfics is how well you keep Wheatley in character. I mean, I haven't actually played Portal 2, but from what I can tell you are excellent. And I love how he sings a lullaby to quiet the baby at the end (or at least stop it kicking). Good job. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2017 Aww |
Tara chapter 1 . 9/6/2017 hhhhhhh aAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ILOVEIT THIS IS WONDERFUL |
Mage-of-Space-12 chapter 1 . 6/11/2017 This was adorably awkward and amazing. |
I'm so in love chapter 1 . 4/11/2017 I just finished Blue Sky and had to latch onto this, anything to ween me off (baby joke!) and not just go on, existing, cold-turkey without this story to keep me company anymore. Blue Sky made me cry more than bloody once, and how on EARTH did you write Wheatley so well? He's so perfectly in-character. Can hear Steven Merchant's voice in every syllable. I really love your writing, I'm tempted to read your other works even though I'm not in those fandoms! TL/DR, I love you, thank you for writing these works of art |
Rose Winchester chapter 1 . 11/28/2016 I needed that. Thank you. That was so wonderful. |