I loved this story! I would have reveiwed each chapter but I wanted to read the next chapter so much that I didn't want to wait. Sparks is awesome! I wish there were more absolutly awesome femme-bots like her. I also saw your drawings of her, abd they rock. You are an excelent artist!

Haha! JazzXsparks part at the end was funny! I also liked the part when jazz seemed like he had given her an innocent look when he said 'yeah idiots', at least I believe it said that. Anywho, I like this story ,but your not putting enough feeling's in to the charecter's! I'm not saying that this was bad ,but it could do some adjusting! ~αnnα

AWWWWWWW! Way to go jazz! Manages to screw up but it somehow works out ok for him! I love prowler! Can't wait till you make the sequel! ~αnnα οuτ, peace!

love this story cant wait till the next chapter.

Yay! First reviewer! I've got to say, you've got this setting down. With the way you have set the relationships with the mechs and Spark's self-awareness on height, I can see so many ways this fic could go. I wonder how many mechs/femmes you are going to put in this fic. A secret of great writing is to show your story rather than tell it. Example: Telling- Jamie was happy her boyfriend got her a sprinkly doughnut. Showing- Jamie squealed and jumped when her boyfriend set a sprinkled donughnut on her plate. There...you now know the secret. Now I have to kill you...just kidding. ;) I can't wait until you write another chapter. Keep writing. :)