Man already on the Bingo book at the age of 12-15? Now that is a accomplishment I love and seriously love this fanfic already its good the progress is nice and the character development is good and I give it a 5/5 in my book so yeah love it!

Put the lemon back in, FF isn't as sanctimonious as it used to be. If it was then for example Noodlehammer's stories would've never survived on this site.

It wasn't Kishimoto's sexism, but Shikamaru's. Shikamaru has always been male chauvinistic throughout the series, and since he was the platoon leader...

Lion King's roar? Does that have any relation with Fire Dragon's roar?

just got on to chapter 23 and so far I've had a grand time reading this. great story

The fight seen is good and the wind thing is believable

J'aurais aimé quil ai aussi l'invocation des crapeaux pour pouvoir le transmettre à ses enfants.

Perso j'aime bien la conversation même si cest un peu tard pour moi car a ce moment là elle l'aime avant cela ausit pu marcher mais ici cela fait quoi 5ans cela est trop long.

"Have you ever heard of a one man cell or even a two man cell ?"
That doesn't prove anything. The three man cell could be created from the genin who had passed the bell test. For example if two genin from team 7 and one from team 10 managed to pass the bell test you can make a three man cell with them.
To use the "in Konoha all ninja team are made of three members" argument to have Naruto deduce the real meaning of the bell test shows your lack in critical thinking skills.
You didn't made Naruto appear smart but illogical, not to mention that Hinata and Kiba also seem pretty stupid for not pointing out the very oubvious flaw in Naruto's argument.

my nigga naruto is hittin on the bitches since he was 6 damn!

Lmao English isn’t your first language and you write way way better than I ever could and it’s my only language

So far the best one I've read of all of Naruto Fanfictions and I uh read over 20

Really confused about his lack of use of shadow clones. Doesn't make sense why he's not using them more. He knows that their memories go to him so why isn't he studying, practicing and using them at all really

I am confused as to how Sasuke has become some battle commander with absolutely zero experience leading people, i mean now he has conquered what? 4-5 countries with zero patience or experience? It is getting to be too much.

BS on them leaving the rinnegan behind! He is supposed to be leader of the alliance and it is in the alliances best for interest to eith destroy or take control of the rinnegan