Did ever finish tbis story? Which is very good.

Um... Why haven't you updated? I would love to see a third, fourth, and even fifth chapter of this story. I think this is an awesome!

I'm liking this,please update soon!

And you did it again... I don't know what to say anymore but UPDATE!

You can't abanden this story. Please finish. I like it alot. update soon please. Kat

Good story.

Will you eventually update I mean its been well over a year.

this story is awsome. i can't wait to read the next part

Wonderful story! I really hope you continue soon.

just found this story - and it's great so far! just can't believe you've left it there, need to see the reunion so post soon pretty please ;o)

Wow. this is really good!

Wow. I'm quite impressed. It's a well constructed story, with an interesting storyline. Where a lot of stories of this sort of nature struggle to hold the reader's interest, this is not one of them. The only nitpick is that at times your tenses are off, which makes it a tad odd to read. Looking forward to more.

It's great. I hope to read more soon.

peace out

I am really pleased that you decided to continue this story. It is really original and I can't wait for the next chapter, so don't keep us waiting for another year. Keep it up.

Kate

Wow, I'm thrilled that you're continuing with this story! Great idea, great execution. You keep me on edge, switching from past to present. Thank you for updating!

I really like this story! It is very different from others! Please up-date soon!