CUUUUUUTE! They're so cute together! I can't get enough of them. Omg!

so sweet

this is toooooo cute! can you write more, about this pairing? i'm such a sap for shinji and minako XDDD

I can't help but feel that this is of lesser quality than your other stories. Some of the choppier sentences don't sound as nicely as they should, and they interrupt the flow rather than augmenting the events. And, sadly enough, Shinjiro doesn't seem to be in-character. Surely he would be more forward...

Despite all that, this is still an entertaining read. Though you should edit it once more to remove that hanging "4" in the second paragraph.