| Reviews for The One Thing |
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NicoleBL chapter 7 . 8/25/2013 Oh no don't stop here please :( .. poor gokudera I felt pity for him, he doesn't deserve rejection more than he already got in the past T_T hope you can complete this story, it's really great I loved it :) |
JaylaCaine chapter 7 . 5/10/2012 I love the story. I feel bad for Gokudera for the pain that he is feeling since I know the pain of seeing the one you love being with someone else. |
Puppetshow chapter 7 . 4/22/2012 I want more so please update soon. |
AdaraLove chapter 7 . 4/8/2012 I'm so happy to see an update for this! I think this chapter turned out great! The heartache that Gokudera felt was so strong I started tearing up even though I haven't read this story in months. And Yamamoto was so sweet too. Gokudera's some-what love confession was adorable as well and the kiss was so sweet! I even laughed a little at the end where Goku was being stubborn and not letting Yamamoto leave his sight until he fell asleep. All in all, it was angsty, but it was cute, and I thoroughly enjoy it ) I hope that everything that you're going through works out in the end. It's sounds like you got bombarded with major problems so I totally understand the reason for your long absence. Emotional turmoil is a horrible feeling to have, so I just hope that things are getting better for you ( |
inoshikacho chapter 6 . 2/27/2012 can't wait for the next chapter |
iluvtakeshi96 chapter 6 . 1/3/2012 how sweet can those two be 3 |
AdaraLove chapter 6 . 1/3/2012 This was an absolutely amazing chapter! The emotions were spot on to depict Gokudera's inner termoil. It was very realistic. Anyone who has experienced this similar heartache would probably agree with me. I think you really captured his confusion for his feelings for Yamamoto perfectly too. I loved that it didn't just end with the two of them being happy together at the end of this chapter, there is still a lot of things that need to be thought over and, more things have to develope between them for any sort true romance to blossom. I really can't wait to see how you write the next chapter, and how the two of them interact from now on! D |
animegirl457 chapter 6 . 1/3/2012 poor gokudera! |
AdaraLove chapter 5 . 12/17/2011 Oh, Mukuro was such a jerk this chapter. I bet he did that on purpose because he knew of Gokudera's feelings. But still, Yamamoto ran after him at least, so I just hope that there will be some comfort in the next chapter. Also, the beginning was hilarious with Yama singing into the hairbrush XD. What a loveable dork he is lol. I can't wait to see the next chapter! |
80yamagoku59 chapter 4 . 12/14/2011 i'm looking forward for the next chapter. :):) |
iluvtakeshi96 chapter 4 . 12/12/2011 Yes, Takeshi's shirtless~ LOl xD |
iluvtakeshi96 chapter 3 . 12/12/2011 Aw, Takeshi, you aren't a pig... |
AdaraLove chapter 4 . 12/12/2011 I love seeing how Gokudera is still attached to Tsuna, and I can't wait to see how he struggles with it. And wow, a lemon? I actually can't wait to see how you write your first one, I think you can pull it off just fine ). Hormones are horrible things XD. For this chapter, you were able to write Gokudera's awkwardness off greatly. I'm sad that he was dreaming about Tsuna, but that's only to be expected lol. Atleast Yamamoto showed up at the end ;). Also, just imagining a shirtless Yamamoto holding a plate of steaming pancakes is enough to make me faint. I think I'm starting to feel light headed XD. Shirtless Yamamoto with pancakes 9 |
ChikaPyo chapter 4 . 12/12/2011 oh man, i can't wait for the next chapter. the drama! keep up the good work. x3 |
AdaraLove chapter 3 . 12/12/2011 *blushes* Wow, that was pretty hot lol. Poor Yamamoto though. He just can't help himself around Gokudera. I also wonder what Gokudera was dreaming about, hopefully it is what I think it is ;). I can't wait to see what you write next! |