| Reviews for The Moon and Star Guardians |
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WyldeStarr chapter 6 . 10/12/2019 Awe. I hope you do update or rewrite this. Cute story so far and I liked it. Good work anyways! |
Guest chapter 6 . 1/3/2019 Don't say that to yourself! You're not a dissapointment, don't listen to your parents. You're still here and standing... and bringing happiness to people that you don't even know (you're a good writer btw) stay strong and don't listen to them because they don't know you, only you know yourself truly. Prove them wrong! |
Nelle-ct chapter 5 . 1/23/2017 Omg I love stories featuring Kise(why does my phone always autocorrect his name to Kiss?!) I love that he's super strong! Please continue! |
TheGrammarNaziIsHere chapter 5 . 10/31/2013 hmmm... |
Mad Decameter chapter 5 . 5/28/2013 Who's 'Dad'? |
hmm chapter 4 . 5/24/2013 Don't you think they are taking the mafia thing all too well? 'cause when i read their reaction it sounds more like Tsuna was inviting them to join a charity community than a mafia family, seriously their reactions are not really realistic, Kuroko i can understand since hes always stoic (or in this case she) but Kise is more active and cheerful so i expected a more shocked reaction from him.. and all the guardians have gone through training with reborn before the inheritance ceremony, so don't you think its a little risky for Kise and Kuroko to become mafia without training? Especially since their girls! (i'm not insulting any girls out there for i am a girl myself) On another note, this story has a nice plot but please try to make it more realistic and try not to make anyone OOC :) Hope i helped! please don't consider this a flame, this is merely constructive criticism :) if you wan't to respond or speak out your defense to this please PM my account "Rain Dropped" XD (most probably not since i can see this wasn't updated since '12) because i forgot to login.. |
Dee Cavallone chapter 5 . 3/28/2013 this story so amazing... please up-date next chapter ASAP! *slap* |
hitomi65 chapter 5 . 11/16/2012 nice stoey |
ShinigamiinPeru chapter 5 . 10/13/2012 its very interesting and i loved it so update real soon... |
Tsukkitsu chapter 5 . 10/13/2012 I really love your story please update soon _ |
F.Akane chapter 5 . 10/8/2012 In my opinion, I think Kuroko should be Moon guardian because Moon needs sun to shine (light and shadow). and Kise suits more being star guardian, we can only see stars when it's night and cannot see it when its day like how she turns to be a phyco on the court and not outside the court.. :D but it is great! :D |
Kalliso-Myth chapter 5 . 9/24/2012 Wow this is good, I can really see some changes since last time. I hope you will continue to write good chapters. |
hibarikyoya.thecloud chapter 5 . 9/22/2012 can try to make a part of Kuroko scaring Tsuna with his/her weak presence... (OwO) |
BlueCloudNagi chapter 5 . 9/22/2012 so cool... i can't wait for the newest chapter... |
Kuroshiroryuu chapter 5 . 9/12/2012 I kind of liked the first plot you had before than this new plot... It's just I was wondering how the joker-Kuroko would be like is all since it seemed interesting more than having Kise do it. I'm just kind of disappointed is all. (-3-) No hard feelings just preference. |